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Open Poetry #28

In The Long Dreams Of Springtime's Restless Sleep

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-09-03 10:05 AM

Summer's winded gait
September's softened shadows
Winter's eyes at night

soft October rains
the taste of Autumn's sunsets
Winter's patient wait

©2003 by icebox

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2003-09-03 10:16 AM

"Winter's patient wait"

yes and it's pure evil...even in Florida it gets cold and I hate it...

Lovely Icy one!

Susan

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-09-03 04:16 PM

September's waxing
full moon harvest as sun sets
whippoorwills singing

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-09-03 04:24 PM

Piles of ragged leaves,
flung together, huddle up
against autumn's chill.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

4 posted 2003-09-03 04:34 PM

The teeth of the rake
are still holding last years leaves
babies of the fall

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-09-03 07:59 PM

I love your title and the writes are great.You are an ispiration to my soul

Crystal

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

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Out Making Anticlines

6 posted 2003-09-04 04:23 PM

Haiku. I love this form, and you work them very well indeed. Much depth here, more introspection than, well, outrospection. Hm, must inform the Society For The Restoration of Lost Positives about my new word!

Remember, Winter has no choice but patience. We do.

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