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Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-09-02 06:44 PM

Raining On The Roof

I awake on this cloudy morn
filled with pain
and
drenched in overwhelming anxiety.
My face streaked with tears
and a pain that does not cease.
Stains on my pillow,
stains on my heart,
it must be the rain on the roof,
clouding my vision so that I cannot see
beyond the torment of my broken memories.
As I gaze out my window
it seems as if the clouds
are dipping low and touching the ground.
These darkened clouds of gray
spreading sorrow with each slice
of
moistened texture of clear crystalline water
that carry the delicate shades
of a peaceful rainbow.
I stand in the pouring rain
hoping to receive solace
from this heartbreaking anguish.
But! Alas!
I stand and contemplate the paths of life
and
wonder why I have tears so many searing tears?
It must be the rain
Raining On The Roof.

PS. We have been having alot of rain and this is what I come up with.
Enjoy
Love Bon-Bon

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-09-02 07:01 PM

Oh, and I did enjoy! I love the rain--I even enjoy the mellow, down feelings that prolonged rains can produce at times.

EA

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-02 08:03 PM

guess ya gots the rainy day blues hon,,
the sun will rise and dry your tears soon,,,

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

3 posted 2003-09-02 08:32 PM

Well. gray skies and rainy days tend
to blue up MY days, too! The blue I
PREFER is the sky, peeking through some willowy, fluffy clouds!

Very well done, I enjoyed!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-09-03 09:04 AM

raining too often here...

but the feelings came through

M

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

5 posted 2003-09-03 12:27 PM

I know what you mean ..the weather kind of sets a mood in some way, or another. Wanna share my umbrella?

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-03-2003 12:31 PM).]

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

6 posted 2003-09-03 12:40 PM

Rain always makes me contemplate life, too. But rain can be such fun. Beautiful post.. dance a but out there, k?

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2003-09-03 12:47 PM

no pain, no gain...putting it mildly, without this system presently hovering, that ol hurricane Fabian, might be hitting us here on the east coast with a stronger vengence and so my dear friend...as your words so elequently depict...there is reason for everything, despite the anxieties....love and hugs sent your way....

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