inbetween i love you and good bye

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kaleanna
Member

since 2003-08-18

Posts 89
TX, USA

0 posted 2003-08-31 10:51 PM

Her heart doesnt know how much more it can take
before it gives in, and breaks
She thought she had found her love so true
but now the cloud of doubt surrounds her
.
The arguements are taking their toll
the tears continue to silently fall
no loving words does she hear
no gentle touch to wipe away the tears
.
What happened to the love she thought she found
when did it leave, or is it still there
Hidden by the curves life has thrown them
She tries so hard to right the wrongs
.
no matter the cost, she still holds on
feeling caught inbetween
i love you and good bye
.
She feels as though sometimes she is fighting
for a battle that cant be won
She is frightened that she will be on her own
with no one to hold her
.
this fear she hides deep inside
and she dries her eyes
She knows that when she loves
she will continue to fight for
the battle
for the love that was there
.
no matter the cost, she still holds on
feeling caught inbetween
i love you and good bye

Meesh

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

1 posted 2003-08-31 11:19 PM

Kinna like being cuaght between a rock and a hard place m'friend. Between I love you and goodbye is a tough road to travel, I know because I have lived that journey.

But, let me tell you something that it took me years to learn: You may have to be alone for a while, but alone can be good for the soul. Gives you time to breathe and re-group so to say. If you can be strong alone, then you will find that being with another person is even better!

Wonderful heartfelt write!

Tima

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-09-02 11:59 PM

Shara @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

cuda04
Junior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 46
Wisconsin,USA

3 posted 2003-09-03 12:45 PM

There is no easy answer to the questions you all but asked, love hurts, and it brings joy. I have currently been out of my last relationship for four months, and I am doing alright, not great, but alright, you will survive, trust me.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-09-03 02:24 AM

Sometimes if we step away from the emotions and look at the situation from a distance it becomes more clear...James

heartpiper
Member

since 2003-09-02

Posts 57

5 posted 2003-09-03 03:02 AM

in many instances, one would have to carry the "shards" of his dignity in his bag, look at the sky, sigh, and walk into a new avenue of life.

regards

"Hallow the body as a temple to comeliness and sanctify the heart as a sacrifice to love; love recompenses the adorers."
Khalil Gibran

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-09-03 09:18 AM

Each new day
each new step
allows you growth
toward a new light
and a new life...

walk on.

And continue to write.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2003-09-03 09:31 AM

Well done Meesh!!

Susan

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2003-09-03 09:34 AM

I would like to echo Tima's reply ver batim!

Your descriptive and emotive write caused me to revisit a painful time in my own life. Very effective writing.

Love and healing hugs,
EA

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-09-03 09:36 AM

no matter the cost, she still holds on
feeling caught inbetween
i love you and good bye

Meesh, this is a very touching write.
I hope things are better soon.

Hugs

Ethel

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