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My Heart
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My Heart |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Sometimes it seems as if there's nowhere I can go. From the pain inside me that seems to overflow. Darkness that surrounds my heart. Chipping away at each little part. The pain that surrounds it seems so real. The sadness is too much that I feel. My heart trying to break through the wall of despair. Trying so hard to make the repairs. Feels like I've been locked up and thrown away the key. How do I get this turmoil out of me? Like a theif in the night. Shaking completly with so much fright. My tears falling endlessly. Crying and crying inside of me. Take the knife and cut my heart in two. That would be so much easier to do. My pillow is now soaked with tears. Of pains come and gone over the years. I know somehow I'll finally break free. And then my heart can deeply breathe. Chipping away the darkness and fright. Taking back it's beating life. Filling it with the brightness of light. Giving it back eternal life. Crystal |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Sadness .. our muses seem to indulge on it. Wonderful write. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Karou:Thank you, it's just a part of me and a feeling at this moment in time.This too will surely pass and so will your's my friend  Crystal |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very well expressed,,, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Crystal . . . the key is knowing that now is pain, but shall pass which you do know The NOW is what is the hurdle, m'friend This I do know quite well beautiful writing xxoo |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I know somehow I'll finally break free. And then my heart can deeply breathe. Chipping away the darkness and fright. Taking back it's beating life. Filling it with the brightness of light. Giving it back eternal life. Crystal, this is beautiful, though sad. And, just hold on, because the ending you wrote above will come to pass sooner or later.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Crystal~ In time's passing ... I would wish your own thoughts back to you~ 'I know somehow I'll finally break free. And then my heart can deeply breathe' Drop me an email ... okay ? [email protected] *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you paint the pain and the time well.. nicely done... |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
I know somehow I'll finally break free. And then my heart can deeply breathe. Chipping away the darkness and fright. Taking back it's beating life. Filling it with the brightness of light. Giving it back eternal life. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ just give it time...it always happens Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Crystal that is some emotive, plaintiff write! Sounds too real to just be poetry! ~ May the sun, the moon and the stars guide you along your life's path with divine Light. Loving, healing hugs, Linda |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
QJQ:Thank you littlewing:Thanks,I know it will pass some days are just harder than others.You are a sweet lady Ethel:Thanks my sweet friend.I know it will it just takes time Marge:Thanks.You are a true angelic lady.Will do Cpat:Thanks, I guess it seems to help to release this in this way. Crystal |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Kristie Sue:Thanks I will for time is the healer of all hearts Linda:Thank you so much.You are truly a sweet friend to have.You are as precious as a newborn child with the spirit that flies with the angels Crystal |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
We all have our share of pain...James |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
James:So true, but within my frineds and family we shall make this pain pass. Crystal |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Crystal, it's good you're able to write and get those dark, sad feelings out! Again, I offer to have you email me! Hugs, Marti Nature always tends to act in the simplest way. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Marti:Thank you so much.Without these writes I would be a bitter spirit adn a mean soul.So this releases it.I would gladly email you, but I know your adress. Crystal |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your words  |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I hope you will fond that day when you'll break free soon, Crystal. Thank you for sharing your heart with us. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
But..hey don't feel that way you are such an angel..one of the sweetest peeps around. So don't feel like that...makes me sad...Hey I know...wanna go for a ride in my 70 Chevy SS....I'll ride shotgun...You can drive...Wow I can't believe I said that...now you know I really like you...giving someone the keys...hehehe Just kidding... Don't feel that way...you deserve alot more than that.....  SharaRose @-->-- [This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-04-2003 11:55 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Chipping away the darkness and fright. Taking back it's beating life. Filling it with the brightness of light. Giving it back eternal life. So much heartache... but you end on a note of hope... I hope this transition comes soon for you! *S* I like your work very much. *S* |
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