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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-09-02 12:56 PM

that i would die
as gracefully as they
in brilliant array of color
not waning grey of flesh

how they part
in the dignity of natural purpose
as I straggle in the shame
of a man broken and lost

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (09-02-2003 01:02 AM).]

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-09-02 12:58 PM

A different insight that you always bring to the page.Nicely done.

Crystal

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

2 posted 2003-09-02 01:03 AM

Dang! Aenimal, this was awesome...for lack of a better word so late in the day! I love the message that you displayed.

Thank You so much for taking the time and participating in the challenge!

Tima

[This message has been edited by timothysangel1973 (09-02-2003 01:04 AM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2003-09-02 01:09 AM

Damn Raph, this is amazing. Well done!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-09-02 01:14 AM

thanks for the replies, hate to post and run but g'nite

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-09-02 06:03 AM

Raph, God . . . this is beautiful
you do know how to make death beautiful
and here, the significance of one
certainly does not compare to the other
but the blending is pure beauty
This is brilliant and something
I miss from you
*smile*
xxoo

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2003-09-02 08:36 AM

You have described it perfectly Sir Raph and yes.. if only we did as they.

Fantastic!

it's a

M

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

7 posted 2003-09-02 09:28 AM

awesome raph!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-09-02 09:42 AM

Extremely well written and much enjoyed Raph!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2003-09-02 10:21 AM

*applause*... This is superb!!!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2003-09-02 10:22 AM

Wow! Love the thoughts in this. Into my library it goes. hugs to you Raph. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

11 posted 2003-09-02 11:24 AM

really great

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2003-09-03 09:13 AM

perfect, Raph...

M

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

13 posted 2003-09-03 09:17 AM

Loved it!! I love doing the whole fall/death thing...

Susan

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

14 posted 2003-09-03 09:49 AM

Your words fell down the page as gracefully as falling leaves...

EA

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

15 posted 2003-09-03 11:07 AM

awesome fallsome.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

16 posted 2003-09-03 04:40 PM

You exceeded Tima's challenge. Well done, Sir.

Lady Godiva
Junior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 35
at the bottom of your glass

17 posted 2003-09-03 08:45 PM

who would have thought fall would produce such an image? brillant...

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

18 posted 2003-09-03 08:57 PM

Thank you all for the kind words wish i could respond to all individually but just stopping by quickly

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