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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-02 12:47 PM

I Question Lessons

who taught
the birds
to sing
and how
did the ocean
know
to ride
the waves
of salty tears
why does
the sun always
tire too soon
making shadows melt
into black velvet
where folds
get scratched
by star nails
hanging on
my questions
of when
the impossible
will learn
to become
the possible

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-09-02 12:50 PM

Hmmmm, definetly good question's indeeed.Wish I could answer but sometimes I can't answer myself...lol.Well peneed here.
Crystal

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-09-02 01:51 AM

"making shadows melt
into black velvet
where folds
get scratched
by star nails
hanging on
my questions
of when
the impossible
will learn
to become
the possible"

Damnnnn, H...You
hit me with this one.

alisa
Member

since 2003-08-20

Posts 70
Florida

3 posted 2003-09-02 12:20 PM

i reread this poem today and it just came alive.

great one...

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2003-09-02 12:39 PM

OneSlick~
My my my my my~

'why does
the sun always
tire too soon
making shadows melt
into black velvet
where folds
get scratched
by star nails
hanging on'

This is original poetic creativity at it's finest~
You are rich with imagery~

I just love this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-09-02 01:11 PM

Ya know, Helen
your making me think too much lately
but this, goodness
One day it does become possible,
as you know . . .
it is the in-between that
the questions start popping up
and this write?
sliding off the screen . . .
xxoo

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-09-02 03:58 PM

Pictures!

Your pictures so utterly clear and original here....I'm completely taken by the way you see things, so unique.... the sun tiring...scratched by star nails....gotta love it!

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icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

7 posted 2003-09-02 05:25 PM

Sure does make ya wonder!

*smile*

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

8 posted 2003-09-03 09:13 AM

the impossible
will learn
to become
the possible
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
beautiful write.. as for somethingss... maybe never...

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

9 posted 2003-09-03 01:14 PM

I love the way you say things.. it's always amazing, because it scrtches to a deeper place, and it does everytime. ALWAYS amazing!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-03-2003 01:22 PM).]

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2003-09-03 03:07 PM

Helen.....It is always a good thing to question. I enjoyed this very much!

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

11 posted 2003-09-03 04:03 PM

Helen - this is just awesome - powerful poetry asking a powerful question - indeed I shall ponder it for a while I know - Paul

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