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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

0 posted 2003-08-29 09:47 AM

your shoulder
cool
in the
moonlight

cheek warm
but for
a single
tear

and your
lips

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-08-29 09:49 AM

tender... and perhaps a bit of longing..

nicely done Ed.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-08-29 09:56 AM

I miss reading you...like the captain says..very tender, the kind I like to absorb.

M

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2003-08-29 10:00 AM

Ed...Warmly loving, yet sad...emotions come to life under your pen, my friend. You have a fine talent!

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

4 posted 2003-08-29 10:02 AM

sweeet....

;-)

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2003-08-29 03:51 PM

Ed~
Very tender ink~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-08-29 03:52 PM

Longing tenderness.
Crystal

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2003-08-29 05:16 PM

Ratleader - a'hhhhh yes, the best kind...

BC

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

8 posted 2003-08-29 05:54 PM

"And your lips" sweet and tender with the tang of salty tears spilling down to the gentleness of your heart.
Lovely
Bon-Bon

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-08-29 11:32 PM

Ed, a lot said in a few again.....
with a longing....

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

10 posted 2003-08-29 11:54 PM

*sigh*

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2003-08-31 06:42 PM

Tender sensuality... with a hint of sadness... How well you write so much with so few words... I like this very much, my friend. *S*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2003-08-31 06:44 PM

Like this...James

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2003-08-31 07:18 PM

You have the tenderness and loving compassion to kiss away her tears and bring a smile back to her warm, waiting lips...

EA

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

14 posted 2003-09-03 04:25 PM

Hey Ratleader,
Love your poem.
Sweet and yet simple.

:-)

Froggy

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

15 posted 2003-09-03 04:32 PM

"and your lips"

so soft...so full of longing...
love this one Ed.
~Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have the sand in my shoes ~

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