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Open Poetry #28

Lyric Damnation

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-08-04 10:46 PM

Foaming at the mouth
internal exorcism
of deep demonic scars
left long ago
under cover of night
pale moonlit
graves
shine like diamonds
on this eve
wake from your slumber
you hounds of hell
you creatures from the abyss
who have seduced
with wine debauchery
laced with harlot
poisoned favor
Awken oh my hellish heart
so thou must dine
on the soul
left for vulture's feast
on but this
this evil eve
I remember rote childhood prayers
vaguely
trying to call down angels
as I fall into the abyss
impaling myself
on the razor point
of my own delusion
as Gabriel laughs in the distance

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2003-08-04 10:50 PM

"impaling myself
on the razor point
of my own delusion"

You do have a brilliant way of getting your point across!

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2003-08-05 01:16 AM

BRAVO!!!! What great images, and descriptive thoughts here!! I'm envious of the talent you have at your obvious mastery of this particular art...well done, my friend!! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

3 posted 2003-08-05 01:26 AM

Very, very cool.Well written and full of imagery.

Jason

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-08-05 03:02 AM

oooooo....yeah

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-08-05 08:54 AM

Dan,

Remarkably well done and a little scary...

Susan C.

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