Open Poetry #28 |
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Love me or Leave Me |
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~*Tantalize*~ Junior Member
since 2003-07-29
Posts 26Sunny California (San Francisco Bay Area) |
I wrote this when my boyfriend and I were having a difficult time: Lately I have been thinking And I have I question I need to ask But finding the answer to this question Seems to be a difficult task I am wondering what has happened here In this life we call our own I love you with all my heart But it seems I am living this life alone Lately you have been different But you say it’s me that’s changed But I see changes in you The way you act is strange Like I thought when you love someone You like being together When was the last time “we” hung out? It seems like it’s been forever I guess to you it doesn’t matter We have been together for six years Who cares if I sit alone What’s just a few more tears Well I do care And I am tired of the tears If anything we should be closer After all these years So this is a message to you my love This is the way that I feel Don’t just say I’m trippin’ What I say is real I am tired of chillin alone I’m tired of boring nights I’m tired of you always leaving me Causing pointless fights This isn’t the way to live This isn’t how a relationship should be So I’m saying things need to change Honey, Love me, or leave me. "There are moments in my life I will always remember, not because they were big events, but because you were there to make the worth remembering." ~Un |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
I have read this poem 4 times now. It really hit close to home. Even down to the time together of six years. Is funny sometimes how complete strangers can seem to live scuh similar lives. This was my marriage to an exact T. By the way, she chose to leave.... Thoroughly enjoyed the read, thank you for posting. MysticalNights A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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~*Tantalize*~ Junior Member
since 2003-07-29
Posts 26Sunny California (San Francisco Bay Area) |
Thanks Mystical... Im glad you enjoyed it...it is crazy how different people in different places at different times go through the same things huh? I've chosen to stay...for the time being, lately things have been better, but better doesn't always last right? So we'll see I guess. Thanks for reading. "There are moments in my life I will always remember, not because they were big events, but because you were there to make the worth remembering." ~Un |
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~*Tantalize*~ Junior Member
since 2003-07-29
Posts 26Sunny California (San Francisco Bay Area) |
oopers [This message has been edited by ~*Tantalize*~ (08-04-2003 10:15 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep! you got that right! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
After six years and commitment in question perhaps it will be necessary for you to leave him...James |
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