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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-09-01 07:24 PM



what do I do
what do I say
tommrow is another
day.

that is what they
tell me,what they
want me to think
love is evil
love can be
blind.

all in due time
all in due time
that is what they
say. ill find out
what this so called
love is about in
all in due time

what about the hurt
it causes the sorrow
that can stem from it
a stranger replies
what about the love and
the light that it shines
in your eyes.

the natural glow
and beautiful oral
that is around you
when your in love.

in love yes that is nice
its nice to be in love
but what about out of love

is it really what i was dreaming
of? what happens when your in love
and the heart is broken into pieaces?

the man replies that is life
and how it is. deal with it as
you go. broken wings heal just
as your heart will. all in
due time all in due time.

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QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-09-01 07:47 PM


wow this was terrifically expresed and a absolute read,,,

         


Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2003-09-01 08:09 PM


thank you
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