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Open Poetry #28

Rainbow (acrostic)

kaleanna
Member

since 2003-08-18

Posts 89
TX, USA

0 posted 2003-09-01 04:40 PM

Realizing that everything will be
Alright, no matter what happens
If only we believe.
Never let anyone take your dreams, always
Believe in what you have to
Offer, stay true to yourself and
Whenever possible, seek out the best in others

Meesh

eminor_angel
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since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

1 posted 2003-09-01 07:18 PM

I like this. It's better than most acrostics I've read. Just one thing, but your poem doesn't really seem to have to do with your word (rainbow), unless I'm missing something.

kaleanna
Member

since 2003-08-18

Posts 89
TX, USA

2 posted 2003-09-01 07:31 PM

ty, am glad you liked it.

As far as it having to do with the word, from my understanding of what an acrostic is is that you were to make a poem out of the letters in a word, not necessairly the poem having to do something with the word, but i could be wrong on that, but that was my understanding of it.

Thanks

Meesh

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