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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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Shall I write then, of sky the moon and the stars Or, the cooling breezes that bother August draperies Or perhaps, of the woman that stands in that window lit, by the nightwash and washed in the wafting Her troubled brown eyes shine past the curtains the window, the yard and the houses beyond Far past her city and the hills to the south to a thin ribbon of river that flows by a man Who dreams of brown eyes "In looking Northward, I see a light" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, please... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow Ed, you do it well m'friend. Maree  fate is not just |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...Sometimes far is so far...yet, other times it feels near. This felt like both. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I know that brown eyed woman... You write it well.. Susan |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Awesome !! Chris |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Damn Wranx that was good! ...ahh, that brown eyed girl xxoo Tima |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Ed, Usually when I enter a forum and I see your name and a poem next to it, I read it. And everytime it makes me go "Wow, that was good." You definitely have a talent with poetry. -Craig a trickle of music from a well |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You take my breath away and fill me with such passion after reading this you my friend are an poet that stes his masterpiece free for all to see.  Crystal |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
By that river flowing fueled by thought stands a man wild staring eyes green as the August growth underbrush speaking dreams of past, present and future The August breeze of the city wafting for a second grasping every nerve ending reminiscient of tales dreamt and spoken delivered by eyes which shine brown to green to brown a chameleon staring in that distant city by the lake [This message has been edited by littlewing (09-02-2003 10:15 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Shall I write then, of sky the moon and the stars Or, the cooling breezes that bother August draperies Or perhaps, of the woman that stands in that window Ed, just write whatever yur heart desires, and we will read it and love it. You are awesome, you know?? :heart; Hugs  Ethel |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely said Ed..and may your dreams find a reality to grace them. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
nice job Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . breathe . . . |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
do you remember when... she used to sing? (just like that)  nice |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Smiling here... This is lovely, Ed. Hugs to you, friend.. "My friends are my estate." |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Oh my...this swept me away, and left me breathless. WOW!!! I hope this brown-eyed girl finds her way to her man. WOW!!! again. Very nice! Also made me think of Van Morrison's song..."Brown-Eyed Girl."  Shara @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-02-2003 11:19 PM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes, dreaming of brown eyes.... |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
Lovely dream, it's sad when awakened. Well penned. |
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Lady Godiva Junior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 35at the bottom of your glass |
beautiful... [This message has been edited by Lady Godiva (09-05-2003 04:08 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
when you look into the mirror, may they meet you there . . . |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
See them, I do Warm, bright, clear and smiling! "In looking Northward, I see a light" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
*smiling . . . yes . . .* |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Shall I write then, of sky the moon and the stars'' yes please do.....hugssssss Lauren~ The way you move me |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
hmmmm, sounds like the house was Victorian, with a quaintly appearance. Nice. mysticpoe If nothing is something |
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Tara Simms Hall Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87South Carolina |
The wistful longing is tangible. You nailed it! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Thank you friends, for the kind replies. You people stun me sometimes *smile* Ed |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Great read wranx. Thank-you for posting this verse. |
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MorninGlory Member
since 2003-08-30
Posts 175Oklahoma |
A poem of such yearning, but that love can reach across all the miles.. wonderful poem. ~ becky |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ed~ Pure poetry ... gracefully tender~ LOL ... love your 'decoupage'~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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