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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2003-09-01 12:41 PM




Feather weight
Under the gate

This mound of lie overbearing
Consturcted alone

Limits and procedures
Legal inside

Get free,

Years,
Pride just a pass off
Truth and guilt
Solid chains inside this giant dungeon of secret

Truth in a book
Sealed
Welded shut

Free to tick as a machine
Robots and mechanics
Rust, dirt, and smut
Lock
Collaspe

Numeric technology,
Control

Forward
Never back
Gone forever
Almost like death
Eternal

Strong power force strength
Fade never

Never until death do us part
Us

Until death do I part

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

© Copyright 2003 Kenneth Craig Rogers - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-09-01 12:44 PM


Great write..
green_itchy_stuff
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2 posted 2003-09-01 12:45 PM


thanx
Kaoru

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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3 posted 2003-09-02 01:07 PM


Craig:

a perfect stanza:

Forward
Never back
Gone forever
Almost like death
Eternal

lovely writing
xxoo

green_itchy_stuff
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4 posted 2003-09-02 07:31 PM


littlewing- it was you and Kaoru that talked me into posting in open and you've both replied to this one.  And thanx for the compliment.

Craig

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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