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leighsa
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0 posted 2003-08-31 11:29 PM



NOTHING TO SAY
Darkness in the night As darkness in the day,
Foolish in the heart though that’s not what you say,
Mindless in my head and floating in my dreams,
Darkness in the light and the troubles that it brings,
Singing in the song and breaking in the bone,
darkness oh so bright has got me feeling alone,
I give what I Need , and I take what I give,
A life that is not worth living for is a life that is Oh so great
But the dreams will give me hope,
And hope will give me dreams,
If the darkness brings the light then dark the light will bring,
Laying  on my back I ‘ll look you in your eyes,
fearing of the day that I’ll have to say goodbye,
needing like the wish I’ll wishing for the way,
knowing there’s nothing To worrie about,
so...., I have nothing more to say..

Ashgiel

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Kahlil
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1 posted 2003-09-01 01:16 AM


"But the dreams will give me hope,
And hope will give me dreams,
If the darkness brings the light then dark the light will bring"
This struck me.  It's all true. Thanks for helping me "think".  ~K~

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2 posted 2003-09-01 01:17 AM


"But the dreams will give me hope,
And hope will give me dreams,
If the darkness brings the light then dark the light will bring"

indeed.

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3 posted 2003-09-01 02:23 AM


But the dreams will give me hope,
And hope will give me dreams,


Leighsa, I really do like this part.
It's really pretty.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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