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layla
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0 posted 2003-08-31 10:00 PM


A promise to God
if its the only thing I do right in my life
If its my only sacrafice
when temptation is so much
Lust from first touch
Can't be part of that crowd
even if society says its allowed
now a days
people sway
couples divorce
this powerful force
I give up
I wont fall
I wont die
I wont crawl
I'd throw myself into the pit of the ocean
before giving in to the sin of this crazy emotion

[This message has been edited by layla (08-31-2003 11:08 PM).]

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kaleanna
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since 2003-08-18
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1 posted 2003-08-31 10:43 PM


good read

Meesh

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2 posted 2003-08-31 10:47 PM


Layla, this is a powerful write....very
emotional.

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