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I Owe You.
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I Owe You. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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I am no different.. Neither are you. You'd like to think that you can bring me down with filthy comments about how, I am no different. I'll just put you out with tomorrow's cigarette.. You won't get the chance to burn. No longer because of you will I filter out my veiw.. Stagger and curse my scene will be more green without your pushing a screen upon an empty window. You have worn thin.. You are no different.. with your doubled words your inability to describe the world .. You are oblivious to the heart I've put into this. No farwell has ever felt this good. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Pure emotion fills every word of this poem...Very heartfelt... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"No longer because of you will I filter out my veiw.." Excellent! Susan |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific write n read, lady poet |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"No farwell has ever felt this good." ~ Keep that thought! Warm, healing hugs, EA |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"I'll just put you out with tomorrow's cigarette.. You won't get the chance to burn." Geez Meg, that was great! xxoo Tima |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
wooooooohoooooooooo. damn, you made me feel this, even though i don't quite yet maybe soon i will. your words make me hope for this release. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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