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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-08-31 12:19 PM

.
.
I have decorated words
for you
and trees of christmas
where
you will never gaze again

I have leaned upon newborn
January frost
waiting for your return
giving up
so many hours for cold

Walking upon cobbled stone
unbalanced underfoot
shamelessly
let me down that day
when I needed you

Umberella shield
against spring rain
nothing I said
could make you see
the downpourcreated

When your words
no longer move
the heart and mind
of whom it always did
that's when you know

The summer gold
we anticipated long
was given to a dream
of someone else
I believe
.
.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2003-08-31 12:22 PM

gem...your words always etch me like diamonds...helen

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2003-08-31 12:25 PM

Gem, this is beautiful and sad, so well worded. You really took me into those feelings. ~K~

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

3 posted 2003-08-31 12:29 PM

Another masterpeice Gem!

This is wonderful, and I relate to your message so well.

xxoo,
Tima

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-08-31 12:33 PM

When your words
no longer move
the heart and mind
of whom it always did
that's when you know
definitely true...
hugs
M

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-08-31 01:49 PM

argh this hurt..well summer's over time to find someone new to warm you in the winter..hugss

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2003-08-31 04:32 PM

Thankyou my pretties!

Today has been spent realising I could talk non stop forever at him, and my words would not move a muscle of emotion.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

7 posted 2003-08-31 08:41 PM

Then all you can do, Gemmy, is talk and listen to yourself. And keep writing. Oh man, it's so difficult, isn't it? ~K~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-08-31 08:48 PM

enjoyed

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

9 posted 2003-08-31 09:51 PM

gem...Very touching write. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2003-08-31 10:00 PM

The summer gold
we anticipated long
was given to a dream
of someone else
I believe

~ Oh, gem drop, this is achy breaky heart stuff! You may not feel like shining right now, but your writing is brilliant!

Lovin' hugs,
Lindy

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

11 posted 2003-09-01 12:55 PM

This is beautiful, though it aches..
Unfortunately, I'm drying tears because of the words.. But, you're that good at this..

Which is good.. I just
know how you feel..

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2003-09-01 03:45 AM

When your words
no longer move
the heart and mind
of whom it always did
that's when you know

The summer gold
we anticipated long
was given to a dream
of someone else
I believe

Gemma, even though you're sad, you still
shine like our gems in our PIP treasure chest.......

With love and hugs, my friend

Ethel

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

13 posted 2003-09-01 09:21 AM

Beautiful...poignant...and full of deep longing.
Great poem.
Eric

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

14 posted 2003-09-01 10:36 AM

Jesus gem:

The summer gold
we anticipated long
was given to a dream
of someone else
I believe

I believe too . . . for me, I mean
but Fall is approaching, time for renewal
(yeah right, easier said than done)
beautiful writing missy
xxoo

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

15 posted 2003-09-01 11:06 AM

Gemma~
I don't think I've ever seen ache done so beautifully~

'I have decorated words
for you
and trees of christmas'

This ? This is just a stunning thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

16 posted 2003-09-01 03:35 PM

Very nicely written...

And I know the feeling of talking to a wall..

Susan

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

17 posted 2003-09-02 10:12 AM

When your words
no longer move
the heart and mind
of whom it always did
that's when you know

The summer gold
we anticipated long
was given to a dream
of someone else
I believe

Your pen has painted such an ache... It hurts too much to be called beautiful... but it's excellent!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

18 posted 2003-09-02 10:19 AM

I,
   for one ... ,

        believe that in matters of the heart,
            the beat is louder than any words ...

                      *S

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

19 posted 2003-09-02 12:00 PM

how sad...how true....

good job...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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