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When words make no difference
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When words make no difference |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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. . I have decorated words for you and trees of christmas where you will never gaze again I have leaned upon newborn January frost waiting for your return giving up so many hours for cold Walking upon cobbled stone unbalanced underfoot shamelessly let me down that day when I needed you Umberella shield against spring rain nothing I said could make you see the downpourcreated When your words no longer move the heart and mind of whom it always did that's when you know The summer gold we anticipated long was given to a dream of someone else I believe . . Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
gem...your words always etch me like diamonds...helen |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Gem, this is beautiful and sad, so well worded. You really took me into those feelings. ~K~ |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Another masterpeice Gem! This is wonderful, and I relate to your message so well. xxoo, Tima |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
When your words no longer move the heart and mind of whom it always did that's when you know definitely true... hugs M |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
argh this hurt..well summer's over time to find someone new to warm you in the winter..hugss |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thankyou my pretties! Today has been spent realising I could talk non stop forever at him, and my words would not move a muscle of emotion. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Then all you can do, Gemmy, is talk and listen to yourself. And keep writing. Oh man, it's so difficult, isn't it? ~K~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
gem...Very touching write. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The summer gold we anticipated long was given to a dream of someone else I believe ~ Oh, gem drop, this is achy breaky heart stuff! You may not feel like shining right now, but your writing is brilliant! Lovin' hugs, Lindy |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is beautiful, though it aches.. Unfortunately, I'm drying tears because of the words.. But, you're that good at this.. Which is good.. I just know how you feel.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
When your words no longer move the heart and mind of whom it always did that's when you know The summer gold we anticipated long was given to a dream of someone else I believe Gemma, even though you're sad, you still shine like our gems in our PIP treasure chest.......  With love and hugs, my friend  Ethel |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful...poignant...and full of deep longing. Great poem. Eric |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jesus gem: The summer gold we anticipated long was given to a dream of someone else I believe I believe too . . . for me, I mean but Fall is approaching, time for renewal (yeah right, easier said than done) beautiful writing missy xxoo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gemma~ I don't think I've ever seen ache done so beautifully~ 'I have decorated words for you and trees of christmas' This ? This is just a stunning thought~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very nicely written... And I know the feeling of talking to a wall.. Susan |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When your words no longer move the heart and mind of whom it always did that's when you know The summer gold we anticipated long was given to a dream of someone else I believe Your pen has painted such an ache... It hurts too much to be called beautiful... but it's excellent! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I, for one ... , believe that in matters of the heart, the beat is louder than any words ... *S |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
how sad...how true.... good job... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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