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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2003-08-31 10:23 AM

He clouded my heart
with love
and gifted my soul
with his rain
soothing, comforting
drenching my life
in sweet emotion
and when
his lightning strikes
I am captivated
dazzled
by his brilliance
held
in awe
of his power
to love
me

~SEA~

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-08-31 11:20 AM

Smiling!!!!!!! I love this!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-08-31 11:31 AM

and when
his lightning strikes
I am captivated
dazzled
by his brilliance
held
in awe
of his power
to love
me

I feel the same about my Love....

Hugs

Ethel

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2003-08-31 11:37 AM

SIGH

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-08-31 12:22 PM

lovely, SEA

hugs
M

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2003-08-31 03:49 PM

SEA - as you have written, good love always works...

BC

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

6 posted 2003-08-31 04:01 PM

Love is an amazing human phenomenon. Thanks for sharing this with us.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

7 posted 2003-08-31 04:03 PM

It's amazing what love can do.Simply beautiful here.

Crystal

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

8 posted 2003-08-31 05:02 PM

Susan,

wow! such a beautiful beautiful write!
this is one of my favorites of yours for
sure!! you always write with such emotion
girl! i sit in awe. take care.

love ya
Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2003-08-31 06:45 PM

Oh...very nice...James

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

10 posted 2003-08-31 06:58 PM

oh my isn't love grand,,,

nicely expressed,,,

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2003-08-31 08:49 PM

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