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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-08-30 03:04 PM





I feel your fingertips
as they linger
leaving the impressions
of your love on my skin

They stay there as
a wisp of breeze
in the cool
of summers night

Like fresh breathe
of air on my skin
is your love when
you breathe it on me

For I feel your fingertips
as they linger
leaving the impressions
of your love on my skin.........





[This message has been edited by garysgirl (08-30-2003 03:06 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-08-30 03:18 PM


what a sensually nice write
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2 posted 2003-08-30 03:19 PM


Very nice Ethel
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3 posted 2003-08-30 04:31 PM


--literally gave me the tingles!--Nice ones!


Linda

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4 posted 2003-08-30 04:39 PM


Beautiful!
Eric

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5 posted 2003-08-30 04:45 PM



"I feel your fingertips
as they linger
leaving the impressions
of your love on my skin"

Oh my, Ethel...your poetry keeps getting
more and more beautiful with every write.

This is simply wonderful.

Love and hugs...
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

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6 posted 2003-08-30 05:04 PM


Ethel,

This was beautiful!  


Susan

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7 posted 2003-08-30 05:22 PM


I think we all would enjoy just this!

Very nice,  Ethel

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8 posted 2003-08-30 05:44 PM


beautiful..I once felt this way~

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9 posted 2003-08-30 05:58 PM


Ohhh Ethel . . .
this is just heavenly . . .
Made me smile
xxoo

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10 posted 2003-08-30 06:03 PM


nice
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(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is just beautiful, sweet friend, your romantic poetry always brings smiles to my heart! (kiss on cheek) May your fingertips forever be intertwined with Gary's real soon, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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12 posted 2003-08-30 07:53 PM


Gave me shivers...one of your best writes my dear. TD
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13 posted 2003-08-30 08:37 PM


loved the anime and the sensual poem
Kethry

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14 posted 2003-08-30 08:47 PM


Ethel, Ethel, Ethel...

Lady, this is exquisite.  From visual of art to your words which speak beauty.  Definitely one of your best, in my opinion!

Love this!

Patricia

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16 posted 2003-09-02 10:57 AM


Jade, thank you. I'm glad that you liked it.  
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Raph, thanks. I appreciate that.  
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Linda, I'm glad that you got nice tingles. HaHa!!  
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I thank each of ya'll and appreciate all of
you, too.
Hugs to all of you  
Ethel

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17 posted 2003-09-02 11:00 AM


Eric, thanks for thinking it's beautiful.  
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Vicky, thanks for thinking so.
That's sweet of you.
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Susan, I'm glad that you liuked it.  
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Barry, thanks for thinking it's nice.
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I thank each of you and appreciate ya'll, too.
Hugs to all of you  
Ethel

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18 posted 2003-09-02 11:09 AM


Maureen, you will again...i really believe.
Thanks, lady.  
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Sue, I'm glad that you liked it and that it
made you smile.  
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Vandana, thatnks for thinking it's nice.  
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Noah, thanks for your sweet words. Gary and
I appreciate all of you.  
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I thank each of you and appreciate ya'll, too.
Hugs to each of you  
Ethel

garysgirl
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19 posted 2003-09-02 11:14 AM


Kathleen, thank you. I'm glad that you liked
it and that it gave you shivers. LOL  
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Kethry, I'm glad that you liked the poem
and the picture. thank you.
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Patricia, thank you for likinmg it so much.
Makes me feel good.
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Tima, thank you for the applause. I appreciate it.  
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Ya'll are all so sweet. I really do thank ya'll
and appreciate all of you, too.
Hugs to each of you  
Ethel

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