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The Echo of Your Cry--- inspired by bslickers' Echo
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The Echo of Your Cry--- inspired by bslickers' Echo |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Far away I felt the echo of your cry so very faint like the first drops of rain on upturned face. Far away I felt the echo of your cry and wondered once again if you remembered, if you remembered what we once were. Far away I felt the echo of your cry like butterfly wings beating against the closed door of my heart. Far away I felt the echo of your cry and tears I didn't know existed anymore streamed down my face. I felt you cry on that faraway echo echo's cry. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
gosh....I can't pick a favorite line here....this touches me.... "Far away I felt the echo of your cry and wondered once again if you remembered, if you remembered what we once were." lol ok, I can too pick a favorite line.....this is awesome  |
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jade dragoness Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 76 |
echo heard and understand in this canyon beautifully done, Poet Paula |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
---even the poem echoes! Very effective writing!   EA |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
comes whispers of a far away voice listening ~ hearing that such a nice inspire returns the echo Thanks Paula bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (09-03-2003 11:44 PM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Beautifully done,but so sad. Crystal |
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