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Chapter 3
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Chapter 3 |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Contradictions One night At your place (It was always your place) I told you my theory On why I would never Remarry I told you I would never Ask a man to take on My responsibilities You told me I was nuts That a man that loved me enough Wouldn’t care I loved you for those words And I know, even now That you meant them You went on to tell me That you didn’t want To grow old alone In my heart I was already lost And part of me Was hoping It was me |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
God! THis keeps getting better and better Susan...can you just send me all of it at once, waiting is killing me...hehe |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow....very poignant. Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I loved you for those words And I know, even now That you meant them where's this man Susan...there aren't many like him anymore... nicely told...waiting for more *s M |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Susan, I'm getting impatient, too. You know, you can post three in one day. HaHa!! These are really good...  Hugs  Ethel |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Timothysangel-LOL, no can't do that...no fun in it...Thank you for reading. Ericc-Thank you! M-hmmmmmmm...Both characters have good and bad moments...he had his good moment in this piece... Ethel-LOL, no I don't like to do more than one a day ever...I just wouldn't feel right..one a day seems ok, and so I wouldn't get carried away I left the last five at work...(there are 11)..  Susan |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Wel done your just awesome. cute pic |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 LOL at the chapter teasesounds like a gentle man, wanting to share a long term relationship...when you are ready |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Dan-Thank you..not sure about the pic..but I have a camera and a web cam so I can change it... Mid-lol thanks. Susan |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
It sounds like this is a man with old fashioned ideas, girl, and also one who has your happiness in mind! Much enjoyed this chapter, and now on to Chapter 4, eh? ~S~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sunnyone~ Basically the male character is a good person...both of them are not being honest with themselves or each other... Thank you for reading! Susan |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
This saga keeps getting more interesting as it continues. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Mike! Susan |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Geeze lady you keep me wanting more and more.You bring such life to your writes. Crystal |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Susan.. As I move on to the next chapter.. I hover with excitement.. I love your writes.. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
bump |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
so.....????? what next? :-p Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
another good chapter,,, |
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