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Can't Look Away
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Can't Look Away |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Slow motion strides With a purpose, Their heads turning in unison Searching, stalking prey Onlookers can’t turn away This pair, like a movie Too beautiful yet something Hypnotically defiant Bending, using time A dimension all their own In ours almost dreamlike The flip side of life A promise of more Fear drawing us in Desiring immortality Commercials sell it The appeal is real Defying death At any cost |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A very interesting write, Connie. It is sometimes hard to look away, even when we claim to have NO interest in the scene in front of us. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A promise of more Fear drawing us in Desiring immortality I turn off to commercials... so solemn a write today... nice to see you Connie hugs M |
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