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Lullaby For A Friend
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Lullaby For A Friend |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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Lullaby For A Friend This be my song of comfort for your soul That you should slumber peacefully in dream May visions of a brighter day console This be my song of comfort for your soul I'll tend the fire and stoke the final coal And bid you sleep till moon has lost its beam This be my song of comfort for your soul That you should slumber peacefully in dream ~vlraynes "My friends are my estate." ~Emily Dickinson [This message has been edited by vlraynes (08-30-2003 05:31 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
oh my i'm feeling very sleepy g'nite all very nice lullaby vicky!!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a beautiful lullabye, Vicky... any friend of yours is one fortunate being... but methinks you're surrounded by fortune  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes I'll have a portion of that.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Considering I just slept for 12 hours!!!  I have to say you are doing some powerful penning here lady! "Mighty--like a rose..."  thank you |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
*smile* Your friend is lucky.... I remember someone sang me to sleep once.... it's amazing what a lullaby sung by a friend can do.... *blink* I'm getting misty eyed. I swear, it's because the cat attacked my eye. Really! *smile* Once again, beautifully written, Vicky. Kielo I'll never forget you.... I know that much, despite my foolishness. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, your lullabye can comfort anyone as your golden heart is filled with pure love for everyone! (kiss on cheek) Here's angel lullabye hugs, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Vicky...Enjoyed. The only problem is I have to stay awake for the next 12 hours, I work nights...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
this is so soothing. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A sweet positive loving lullaby - Overcomes life's negatives every time...  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky...so beautiful...I think I shall read it again tonight. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
A beautiful lullaby for a great frined.You are a wonderful lady. Crystal |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Vicky? I'm going to take this for me too, ok? I need to be sung too, sweetly (beautiful triolet) xxoo |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vlraynes - words most comforting way to fall into dreamland... BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Ahhh, straight to The Cave Of The Good Dreams~ Thank you poetess~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
pleasent piece of poetry. triolets are difficult to write and you've done a decent job with the form. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Simply lovely, among other things....James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A lovely lullaby by a lovely lady. Sending loving, healing hugs to your friend. Linda |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
This be my song of comfort for your soul I'll tend the fire and stoke the final coal And bid you sleep till moon has lost its beam ----------------------------------- I'm seeing this; I can see you tending the fire...stealing a glance here or there to check on the friend you send to dreamland...staying awake 'til the moon sleeps, and the friend is rested... very warm write vick.. hugs, g "They say that Anger is just Love disappointed..." Eagles |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow, Mum, this is beautiful There's nothing like a good fight with a horse to put your problems into perspective |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vicky, you are one of the sweetest people I know...so compassionate and caring for others. I think you would be a very good friend to have around. Hugs Ethel By the way, I love the triolet and am keeping it to study. Hope that's okay? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The perfect lullaby poem to read before going to sleep! This is so soothing and soporific... Your gentle caring soul is shining through, Dear Vicky.  Sweet Dreams, Linda |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
You know what? this entire poem, I dedicate to you There's nothing like a good fight with a horse to put your problems into perspective |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Glenn...glad this did it's job...*smile* Thanks so much, my friend. Karilea...you are too good to me...ya know that? Thanks for always having a kind word. *hugs* Sy...of course...as much as you'd like, sweets. Karen...Smiling big here...because IT WORKED! ...grin Thank YOU...for everything...and for being you. Kielo...LOL @ the cat attacking your eye...of course he did...grin. Thanks much...glad you like this. *smile* Noah...thanks, once again, for the kind words. *hugs* Paul...well then, my friend...you need to read this every morning when you get off of work...and then dream sweet. *smile* Kethry...thank you...so glad you enjoyed this. Nan...yes...it certainly can. Thanks much, friend. *love and hugs* Martie...you are welcome to read it anytime. Such a wonderful compliment...thank you much, my friend. Crystal...thank you so much for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed. *smile* Sue...absolutely, you may take it for you too. I'm sure Karen won't mind sharing it. *smile* Love and hugs, lady... Bill...glad you found this comforting...thank you, friend. *smile* Marge...smiling at this taking you to The Cave Of The Good Dreams. wornways...thank you much. I'm glad you enjoyed this. James...thank you, kind sir. Linda...so happy you enjoyed this...thank you so much. Love and hugs to you, my friend...*hugs* Gale...I like your visual...*smile*. Glad you like. *love and hugs* Rhonda...thank you...glad you like it. *hugs* Ethel...of course that's 'okay'..*smile*. I'm flattered that you would want to study it. Love and hugs to you, sweet friend. Linda...thank you for coming back for another read. I'm so happy you find this soothing. Love and hugs to you. Rhonda...again...*smile*...you're too sweet. Thank you. *hugs* Thanks again, everyone! Love you all, ~Vicky If you judge people, you have no time to love them. |
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