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Zinsser
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Calif.

0 posted 2003-08-30 01:46 AM



How long before the real you and me
Nothing holding us back
Nothing to get in the mix
Searching for the quick fix
Ending up in chaos

You are the one I want
Nothing else could ever compare
Demon dust getting in the way
Woven lies fed in eternities lay
Creating a box for you to get stuck
But you seem to have so much luck

Brake free of the lies that bind
In the end you will find
That you were already all that you thought
Before the lie of demon dust was ever bought

Hold fast to the once were’s
And to the are now’s
To the obtainable could bees
So you wont live in the would bee’s


© Copyright 2003 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2003-08-30 02:31 AM


Enjoyed your words...Thanks

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-08-30 02:34 AM


Great read..
enjoyed this

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2003-08-31 03:27 AM


I too enjoyed this tremendously!!  What great food for thought here...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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