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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-08-29 06:17 PM





*A promise made ... a promise fulfilled*


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Patricia
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1 posted 2003-08-29 06:57 PM


Wow, woman!  What a spectacular view you captured!  I will need this dude's eyes next week... have to keep it real for the incoming freshman.  Poor things, they'll be lost for a bit.  

Sorry, got my mind on school.  I can't wait!

Smiling so large at this delight!

Patricia

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2 posted 2003-08-29 07:01 PM


Marge...I really like this. The hawk guarding the night beautiful...Paul

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3 posted 2003-08-29 08:05 PM


Bless you for this..... you just made my day.

This is a promise exceeded by factors of ten.... Thank you, Marge, more than I know how to say.

Ed

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4 posted 2003-08-29 10:45 PM


Dear Marge:  This is haunting and beautiful. We have many red-tailed hawks around here and I love watching them.

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2003-08-29 10:47 PM


Aren't they pretty, and mysterious....

We have lots of them here as well.  My children love to see them in the trees around the house.


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6 posted 2003-08-30 07:27 AM


This is very good Marge. Of course all you write is. Great thought .. the hawk guarding the night.
Love ya,
Betty

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7 posted 2003-08-30 05:53 PM


quote:

bring on the night
I couldn't stand
another hour
of daylight
--Sting (The Police Zenyatta Mondatta


nice hawk  

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8 posted 2003-08-30 06:07 PM


great title and words, as always Marge
hugs
M

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2003-08-30 06:50 PM


Thanks everyone~

Ed~
I am patience-in-pursuit of a promise made~
Am SO HAPPY that you enjoyed that much~
Certainly worth the effort knowing you like it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Ivy Rose
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10 posted 2003-08-31 12:49 PM


Marge...You always display such incredible imagery and images of the soul. Love the image of the hawk and the night. ***Ivy Rose
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11 posted 2003-08-31 12:52 PM


marge...you are my poet...but you KNOW that...helen
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12 posted 2003-08-31 12:58 PM


loved this one
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13 posted 2003-08-31 06:57 PM


A regal sentinel... one you've captured so beautifully. *S* This is one of my favorites, my friend... thank you for your patience! *S*
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14 posted 2003-08-31 07:01 PM


Marge, this is a 'peace' of perfection!


EA

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