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Open Poetry #28

I cant take it

SarBear
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since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

0 posted 2003-08-25 11:53 PM

I cant take your pain
I cant take your pain
I cant take your critisism
I've got all of my own problems
I've got my own hurt
I can cry on your shoulder
but you cant take allt he wrongs
and replace them with the rights
cause they are here
no one can help
not anyone
people are lfeft alone with all the stuff to deal with
the stuff that most cant handle on their own
you can spill your heart
you can fall in love
you can be a fool
but nothing will change the feelings inside
each day quickens
each month lengthens
and your heart blackens
turns to coal
all the things inside just well up
filling over
to the brim
its going to fall
but when
I cant take the srrow
it hurts to much
I think ill just cry
let it out
let it all fall out
let it all come spilling down
cause I cant take it anymore
and theres no one that can help

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2003-08-26 12:05 PM

Sometimes, poetry is the best friend one has -- a friend that brings friends to you in time of need...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-08-26 02:40 AM

you sure are busy tonight

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-08-31 11:17 AM

Sometimes just a hug helps. I think alot of us can relate. Thanks for sharing.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-08-31 06:59 PM

I've said this a few times...but help does come, friends, trust in a God that can be merciful and compassionate...and finally the pain brings changes in us...so in the future we learn to avoid the roads that lead to pain, the ones where we have some control...James

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