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Chasing Rainbows and Racing Tides
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Chasing Rainbows and Racing Tides |
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deScotia New Member
since 2003-08-29
Posts 1 |
Old Flames dance in haunted doorways Our Love consumed, my soul ablaze Eager hands that touched you Liquored lips that kissed you Eyes that saw your pleasured cries Written in heartbeats, eternal ties The Gates of Hell can hold no worse No, no escaping this infernal curse Abandon hope, who enter here For this Lost Child, shed no tear His fate was sealed so long ago Damned, awaiting that final blow 'Love' came cloaked in a muse's guise Web of life, spun bittersweet lies 'SoulMates' locked in a Blasted Tower Sands of time declare the hour But let's not forget sweet moments past Amid the night some sunlight cast Desert starlight on fallen dreams Enchanted forests and summer streams Together, flesh fused in the psychic heat Unearthly passion, swept off our feet Flashback, holy Abbey, stones that sang Innocence, before the doorbell rang The Artist's life has many sides Chasing rainbows and racing tides Hearts that feel too much to bear So much within he cannot share Spring is coming with its ocean swell It cleanses all, even Love's cruel spell |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was great.The flow, the imagery, and the strong emotions.Welcome to Passion's.This is a wonderful first post.I know you'll enjoy it here  Crystal |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is excellent...outstanding write of cadence and imagery...superb vocabulary as well. Quite the powerful write, and makes for a impressive entrance.... Welcome to poetry land...nice to have you here with us. When was the last time you felt high |
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