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Lies. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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Lies. “I’m alright” I whispered, half crying inside As I slowly retreated and started to hide She advanced with a hug and wasn’t denied As I told her “I’m alright” and I knew that I’d lied. Rawr, rawr, rawr |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
At least you didn't turn away the compassion... It's been awhile...we're going to get to start seeing a bit more of you, huh, are we? Hope so! |
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scuffedshoe2 Junior Member
since 2003-08-04
Posts 39 |
Dude, painfully honest...a vivid expression of how we all feel sometimes. Great poem. -ian |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Karilea: Thanks for the reply I have been around, just hiding in some of the darker corners of pip.  Ian: Thanks for the reply Andy Rawr, rawr, rawr |
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~*Tantalize*~ Junior Member
since 2003-07-29
Posts 26Sunny California (San Francisco Bay Area) |
short, but beautiful, thanks for sharing! Loved it! "There are moments in my life I will always remember, not because they were big events, but because you were there to make the worth remembering." ~Un |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Howdy, stranger!  You sound like a man who is strong on the outside, but caring and sensitive on the inside! Sounds balanced to me!   EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Andy, I really loved this glimpse of your heart. I haven't seen much of you in Open since I've been here. I hope you will post more.  Hugs Ethel |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
well this could have been #1, and you only would have had to write four more, but it's all good... I'm not sure how to respond to this, I know of more than one situation that this could be applied to, but I hope everything works out for you, and the main thing is to not lie to yourself, okay? you know where to find me if you want some comforting words or extra hugs or anything like that. *Rhonda* It's hard to grow up and watch your friends remain in the same mindset that you left them in |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...me too |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Tantalize: Thank you for the reply. Earth Angel: Thank you for the reply and all of your sweet comments. Ethel: Thanks for your reply: I hope to post more of my work in here now, I have posted some of my poems here but they haven’t really been suited for the audience in here, or at least that’s what I think. Rhonda: Thanks for your reply. It almost was #1 but I decided against it deciding to use something that I wasn’t so attached to instead. Thanks for all the support through all these days, weeks, months, years . Oh and I’ve given up lying to myself.Passing Shadows: Thanks for your reply and thank you for your support |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Oh i do that! hugs you  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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