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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-08-29 10:30 AM



So you think I care
that you played me
you think I care
that you're a jerk

What makes you think
I lie awake at night
What makes you think
these tears are for you

How dare you think
I still care for you
How dare you think
I even let you in

So what if you're right
but just keep wondering
what you haven't figured
out what I am thinking

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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1 posted 2003-08-29 10:34 AM


a bit of vent..a bit of anger...and someone is left.. a bit scorched..

nicely done..

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2 posted 2003-08-29 10:40 AM


When ya play with fire, ya get burned....

thanks...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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3 posted 2003-08-29 10:55 AM


You vent all you need to girl.It gets it out and lets the light back into your heart.
Crystal

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4 posted 2003-08-29 10:56 AM


Men can be dogs. Your words make that clear.

Enjoyed!

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5 posted 2003-08-29 11:04 AM


Okay, let's try this again...stupid piece of crap computer...

As I said before:

This reminds me of Carly Simon's "You're so vain"...(am I dating myself or has someone redone it yet?)

Men..can't live with them..can't...well, you know the rest..

  loved the venting!

Susan

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6 posted 2003-08-29 11:15 AM


not so sure Susan..that you can't live without them...

I am trying

some solid thinking we gals are doin' today KS and I love your signature.
*s
M

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7 posted 2003-08-29 11:29 AM


LOL I love that song...

ya know she just auctioned off the secret to the highest bidder of who she wrote that about?  They had to sign a contract that they would NEVER tell another soul....

but yeah right LOL  

Vent...ahhhhhh can't vent too much LOL

not all men are dogs, just most... :-p

ya CAN live without em', just buy stock in the Pink bunny :-p

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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