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Weaving Persian Winter
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Weaving Persian Winter |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
My Love The seasons grow to their end And melons will no longer Be the sweet fruit to pick at will From low vines that hug Big leafs to stem And hide As if modesty prevented An easy reveal The swell and curve So treasured We will feast soon On cloudy days That bring cool nights To leave us desiring another robe As we lay Facing Luna’s light This season of heat passing As have the times we lay Teasing the passions Come There are still days to enjoy And I would offer you the last of Summer The first of Fall For your pleasures. That we might find ourselves Once more Exposed as Your blush Becomes the sunset And I the land You color [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (08-29-2003 10:19 AM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron Your paint of the seasons and the wealth of this couple's time together is so well done! I miss you when you're not around...good to see you! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your blush Becomes the sunset And I the land You color darn it...so many good phrases each a poem, Ron Hope you had a good summer... M |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
You make me not miss summer so much :-) Awesome job... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This one was hiding...but I found it.. What can I say that I haven't already said? When you write you write in color, as Monet did painting... I loved it all and love how you can say something and leave it to the reader to decide which way to go with it...  Susan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another awesome piece in watercolor pastel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You do weave tapestries that will stand the test of time... We have missed you. Welcome home. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I wish I'd written this... says it all, doesn't it? Lovely, ~Tier |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well Pard, I have to agree with the womenfolk on this. (It's always safer in any case) Nice to read ya! Ed |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice penning,, lady poetess |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very lovely and hopeful... Good morning Cap, wishing you a great day |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Your blush Becomes the sunset And I the land You color'' an expressoin of love to never be denied....sigh~ lovely...hugsss Lauren~ The way you move me |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
My but this is lovely. Great metaphor, too. Corinne |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
God i miss summer and u brought it to life again thank you  If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come? |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
KEEPER! Thank-you so much for this. I think it is wonderful. Summer's last hurrah...Fall's quiet acceptance. This is truly my favorite time of the year. Once again...thank-you! |
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