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Autumn Bed of Leaves(For ARH)
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Autumn Bed of Leaves(For ARH) |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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 Seeing you walk through the forest, a breeze blows across your face, and freely your hair blows back,exposing your beautiful face to me. No leaves cover the branches now,they are at the very place i worship, the ground you walk on. Swishing through the deep russet, gold and vermilion leaves, a smile beams on your face as you walk in the soft hued autumn light,so free. Immediately you see me you run and we kiss and turn in circles of joy, holding, caressing, kissing feverishly. You take away my darkness and shine radiant rays of colourful love into my life and heart. Tripping i fall to the bed of leaves, lying thickly on the ground,you hold onto me and we fall together,you land on top of me and just place your head on my chest and sigh, how can we ever be apart? Looking up at me, you have a smudge of dirt flecked on your cheek,i wipe it away and your face is still a wonder and joy to me, as we lay in the sappy scented leaves, looking up at bare branches, like fingers stretching to the sky. Please be in my mind and heart in autumn and winter,always be in my heart,my soul, my breath, but most of all always be in my eye. [This message has been edited by Goldenrose (08-30-2003 03:23 AM).] |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You know how we both love the autumn and the leaves, you are so talented to put our thoughts into a poem...I love our time together inside our poems. Distance may separate our bodies but in our dreams and poems we meet and love...thank you sooo much for every word...I appreciate every poem...Your poetry for me is the best gifts I receive..they are pieces of you..pieces of your soul and heart and mind..and you can't buy that in any store! I loved this poem!!!!! xxxxx ~love Lady Love of the forest |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Beautiful lady of the forest..you fill up my senses....you are the person i see in my poems and dreams and nobody else..who could replace you?....love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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minoune Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 87Canada |
:0)) its wonderful to see and feel the joy of two people when they are united... excellent write... minoune |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
but most of all always be in my eye. You are soooo romantic..love that ending~~ *s M |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You are truly romantic and she's a lucky lady.May the love stir within always for you both. Crystal |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
 came back for a second helping of love to fill my heart!xxxxx love your Lady of the forest |
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SongVixen Junior Member
since 2003-07-06
Posts 43England |
beautiful poem and picture, goodluck to the both of you. Your poems and love inspires others. Keep it going, I am enjoying this romance between the two of you. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thank you to everybody for their kind words..especialy ARH...xxxx... Goldenrose. |
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