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Spell on me
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Spell on me |
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youngmoeses New Member
since 2003-08-29
Posts 6 |
i didn't include the first few lines...it's more of a LIVE poem... past mistakes ya made, are laid freshly on my brain took the train to place called change, but came back the same/ in a frame of mind, that holds Divinccis now love convinced me, so loneliness is out to lynch me/ pinch me, awake from dreams, but it seems we've just avoided it you got a spell on me, and I'll never try destorying it/ well if it's love then it's love but when push comes to shove will be able to keep this together i'm tryin to settle down get some better surroundins but fa real girl ya need to stop playin' i need to see emotions rise but ya frozen ya eyes gives the impression that ya don't have no feelings so do a little growin up and come see me when ya find a better way to carry out ya dealings/ it's been a long road comin' and somethin ain't quite right darkness flipped my night light, the hardest when we fight like cats and dogs, draggin on, ain't how it's s'posed to be cus moeses reads a seperate passage from the book of hopefully/ an omen beams above this relationship, find patience it's a virtue that i don't know keep tellin' me to go slow/ but oh no, i rocked the boat, dropped the oars, far from shore, don't wanna swim tonight baby i'm a throw this on a wim tonight/ dwindle right below, time to show ya true colors always been good lovers, but not much outside the covers/ but i can't break free, and ya hold breaks me so like janet, ask what you done for me lately/ maybe it's love, m-m-m-aybe it's magic got me spastic, in a drastic situation sky blasts percipitation, and i'm waitin in anticipation patiently doesn't pay to be COOL, nah doesn't pay to be, i'm on my way to be/ a nervous wreck, herb in deck i'm rollin till i pass out you got a spell on me, and i never wanna back out/ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool! I can hear the music in this! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I also can hear a song in this, wow great write, Rose |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
:-) nice job! Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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