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The Big City Saxophone Blues
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The Big City Saxophone Blues |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
And Mars like the blue note of saxophone plays and rolls upon rows of periwinkle hills, across water, in bands of slate lavender hues, and Aubrey's tooth-gritting laugh. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Fabulous......I loved it! I hope all is well with you. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thanks Sue, are we both back now?! haha! I'm well, and hope you are, too. It's good to see you on here. Thanks for the positive "note". ~K~ [This message has been edited by Kahlil (08-29-2003 01:53 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what an image! nice! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A very pretty and colorful poem. I liked it.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kahlil A delight to read. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Thanks very much, this was a fun one for me! ~K~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kahill...having played the saxophone for several years, I very much enjoyed this.  Hugs, ~Vicky If you judge people, you have no time to love them. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
then you can visualize, Vl, the influence of the light of Mars a few weeks ago, on a city in the midst of rolling hills and mountains, on its streets when they get dark, and their life, including the street players, a glaring contrast to nature's surroundings. I embraced the view. Thanks for your comments. ~K~ |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This was absolutely beautiful.We were looking at Mars the other night and it was amazing.The way it reflected it's brightness, the way the planet itself lloked,and the way it shined with the moonlight. Crystal |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I know, wasn't it an awesome scene? I felt that it touched everyone and everything, especially those aware. Really glad you were thinking about it, too! Thanks! ~K~ |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Perfect wow, what an image. very much enjoyed this.  thankyou.Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I can hear that sax as I read....loved it!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
gemjop, I'm glad you enjoyed this goofy fun tune. sunyone, I knew if you found it you'd like it, too. rock on ~K~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There's a bit of everthing packed into this delightful poem for the senses! I'm into Mars, flowers, hills, water, laughter--and sax!  Linda |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
woohoo Linda, I had to read your message twice, the first time I misread the word sax, and I thought, wow, she's really into it! haha! Glad you enjoyed, and thanks for your comments! ~K~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I thought you might get a giggle out of that! lol loveya! Linda |
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