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measuring the wind |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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I think I shall strap this thought with the sinews of pixellated ink and plop it down here in this blue century of Open 28 much like I was in the Century 20 (by Gregory's reckoning) and it makes me wonder about words how very much like us they are spirits flying in the heaven of Mind given weight by the sphere they inhabit of lines and angles to measure and be measured for that is what works in this atmosphere to be perceived and thus...to be remembered always in the Archives by those you would someday want to stop by the grave-marker and leave a bouquet of flowers to say I was here and I remember that our words...indeed ourselves are but trees sprouted from the wind-blown featureless plain hands grasping up to catch the knowledge of the eternal wind and in doing so make a sound of resistance that can be measured |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
this time, you outdid yourself so I'm keeping this one I read it outloud and I love it  you are way too cool, yanno that? |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
smile.... thank you lady |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"and it makes me wonder about words how very much like us they are spirits flying in the heaven of Mind given weight by the sphere they inhabit of lines and angles to measure and be measured for that is what works in this atmosphere to be perceived and thus...to be remembered always in the Archives by those you would someday want to stop by the grave-marker and leave a bouquet of flowers to say I was here and I remember" Brian...I've been watching for a poem from you, and this was well worth the wait. Have I told you lately that you're beautiful? Well, you are.  Hugs to you, friend...  "My friends are my estate." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bri? *smile* you take the simple roll it around in that brain of yours and spit it out onto the page birthing masterpieces I have no idea how you do this but please, do not stop spirits flying in the heaven of Mind beautiful line amongst many Bri xxoo |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
Vicky.... yes a hug please smile I have just been busy thank you my friend |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
Suzie! you snuck in thank you boo its the sound of marbles clacking around on a hardwood floor yes.... love you lady |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
It's pretty huge, isn't it? Thinking that words can have so much power and influence in them, and to have them touch so many. Yours are very touching, indeed. Loved this Nicole |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
thank you Nic |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
and it makes me wonder about words how very much like us they are spirits flying in the heaven of Mind given weight by the sphere they inhabit of lines and angles to measure and be measured ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You're a mighty fine poet Mister Brian Sites, thank you for this~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
brian I have to tell you that IWIHWT...the thought and conception, is grand!...or is that the conception and birth..in any case, the baby is beautiful! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
spirits flying in the heaven of Mind given weight by the sphere they inhabit of lines and angles Of all these wonderful lines, here touched me deepest. Excellent write. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
God! I'm speechless! (and envious)...lol |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
every time I read you, I think THIS, this is my favorite... smile. Every time.  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
and it makes me wonder about words how very much like us they are spirits flying in the heaven of Mind So, so true, my friend. Brian this is beautiful. I hope you don't mind me keeping it?  Hugs  Ethel |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Beautiful "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and it makes me wonder about words how very much like us they are spirits flying in the heaven of Mind given weight by the sphere they inhabit of lines and angles to measure and be measured for that is what works in this atmosphere to be perceived and thus...to be remembered always in the Archives by those you would someday want to stop by the grave-marker and leave a bouquet of flowers to say I was here and I remember that our words...indeed ourselves are but trees sprouted from the wind-blown featureless plain hands grasping up to catch the knowledge of the eternal wind and in doing so make a sound of resistance that can be measured ======================= oh my........ I need some of what your muse is having.. this is such a very cool write... once again you envoke the words unique, clever, creative..fresh....POET!!!!!  awesome write of poetry and its traces left behind Poet sir. You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name ... |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
WOW!!!!!  You always evoke such thought and your writes become masterpieces that just flow upon the page with such heart and soul.Crystal |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Brian~ Such a soft read~ ' to be perceived and thus...to be remembered always in the Archives by those you would someday want to stop by the grave-marker and leave a bouquet of flowers to say I was here and I remember' VERY much enjoyed~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
You should be proud here... A write as good as ever written. And if not...I am proud of ya Ed... Btw, you just won the chicken drop. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
LMAO@ED!!!! gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
ROFL...smiling at you, Ed... |
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jade dragoness Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 76 |
and it makes me wonder about words how very much like us they are spirits flying in the heaven of Mind given weight by the sphere they inhabit ****** superb thoughts you've achieved great velocity with this write |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
thank you everyone |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
given weight by the sphere they inhabit of lines and angles to measure and be measured for that is what works in this atmosphere to be perceived and thus...to be remembered always in the Archives by those you would someday want to stop by the grave-marker and leave a bouquet of flowers to say I was here and I remember that our words...indeed ourselves are but trees sprouted from the wind-blown featureless plain hands grasping up to catch the knowledge of the eternal wind and in doing so make a sound of resistance that can be measured ~*~ So, can you imagine what this little plains girl is thinking about now? That you're a  |
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