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Open Poetry #28

A Falling angel

Gavin
Junior Member

since 2003-06-22

Posts 47

0 posted 2003-08-28 08:32 PM

Homeless fire
My house is burning
No property
No home for yearning
Fiery cold nights
Asleep inside a window sill
Drinking putrid water in-between life or death fights
And still having time to fall sick and ill
No medicine no warmth
But the burning home I’ve yet to know
So now I sit here inside myself and jump from the window
Does anyone see falling angels........

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-08-28 09:08 PM

probably not till after they hit the ground *shrugging shoulders*

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

2 posted 2003-08-28 10:53 PM

I'm sorry I have nothing great or amazing to say in reply to this poem...I suck at the comment thing lately...but it feels real...I can see it in my mind....kinda goes with the song I'm listening to atm...Runaway train..enjoyed..

Kris

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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