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A While We Love
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A While We Love |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The riveting of armor melts away To soften calloused hands, and hardened hearts of clay Not too sure of always or never, not too clear yet bound together As the approach became the last unlatching key Another level is unclothed, another kiss instinctively And we become the all-consuming fire The captor and the prisoner of all desire How well we have become, exchanged in language of full sum As difficult as any climb, our own revival stopping time Holding out, and holding on…between the sheets of pages gone For as you push and pull away, this much is savored in each sway The touch inside that calls your name, to give and get of all the same And we become this intimate, a level down and deeper fit Again to quiver in such thirst, my body hears and speaks you first Inaudible the trade perhaps, of lust and linger, finger snaps A willingness in high regard, to curve the seas of soft and hard And hold you close inside myself, of every dream unmeasured wealth While this conviction given all, our purest selves in turn free fall Copyright Kkh 8/25/03 |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
now if only I could write like that! But then, I can't rhyme two words on the same page, leastwise as often as you do... Enjoyed this much, my friend. jwesley. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely written,,, I enjoyed the read,,, |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh TD, this is wonderful!! I especially love the meter throughout with such a perfect balance...exceptional!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Very nice, TD. Patricia |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kathleen, I have no idea how many times I've told you before, but I simply love the way you write!!!! I don't know about the correct meter, but you must do it perfectly, my friend. I do know that your rhyme is absolutley marvelous. I just wish that I could write half as good as you do.  Hugs to you, Ethel |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I enjoyed this, nice rhyming and write. Jason |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kathleen - beautiful rhyming writing outstanding Again to quiver in such thirst, my body hears and speaks you first Inaudible the trade perhaps, of lust and linger, finger snaps priceless lines xxoo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD Again you write magic...so perfectly romantic and beautifully written! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sweet.....and perfectly written. Think I'll keep this one to savor again. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
 Absolutely wonderful.The beauty and the intensity in this make me go WOW!!!!!!  Crystal |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
K. you have such a beautiful way of expressing thoughts and feelings... May you never ever stop writing as well and eloquently as you do... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thank you so much everyone. I am a wealthy woman...for every one of you are gold. TD |
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