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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-08-28 11:24 AM



I am mapping copper engravings of your espousal arms
Draping sensations, encrypting my heart
Where you’ve taken me to your place
Exposed and freely expressed in our flowing spiral
Of spirits thinking visibly trusting our justification
Scorching utopia with your thoughts of wanton desires
Leaving me transient and speechless, falling into sweet moist horizons
Keeping our dreams company in the isle of fluted sense
There you embroider with each touch, my uncontrollable breath
Where I believe in everything…allowing circumstance to dictate
The here and now, enigma of life, highest point in the heavens
Eternal dialect of soul, a lost art form that no man divides nor holds to close
Expressions of love curbing the human imagination, changing time
Reflecting our concerns and our pleasures….how we texture experience
Oceans of mountains in one trace makes us real
I am aware of the intensity of your solitary eyes
Beautiful sways of emotion, lingering beyond the poet in I
Such a sweet harboring scent driving me wild, your mind’s fragrance
We surpass our own selves where our language commands voice
In free form of tongue, whispering sensual thoughts
Reflecting feelings…emotions of the transient mind
Illuminating love’s flaming colors warming a structural find
Our needs creating compassion, wearing a crown
Where life is innovative and rewarded with three-dimensional thought
Creating impressions, trembling with the ascension of night
Like a moon beam of jasmine permeating this moment in time

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-08-28 11:35 AM


LeeJ
A warm and sensual read, enjoyed,

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2 posted 2003-08-28 12:36 PM


I found this a bit erotic...

nice job

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-08-28 02:14 PM


Actually, this is what I felt the very first time I visited the carribean...and yes it was indeed, very spiritual and errotic...unlike anything I had ever known before...the quiet words of God over the sea...a peace I'd been looking for all my life, but didn't understand until that very moment...then...crying literally weeping tears of joy...realizing the value, morality, sacred and signficance of an intimate relationship with nature and every thing, feeling your heart beat with the ocean
words cannot describe this total perception of how very small yet significant we are...we are all connected...and each and every thought, action, effects everyone and everything else.  

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