Open Poetry #28 |
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six feet dreams |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space ![]() |
I long for days before the whys tainted mind leaving a barren expanse where dreams come to die |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
RAFFFFIIEEEE *jumps on you and smothers you with unwanted kissies and hugs and rainbows and puppies and kittens* I loofah this ![]() |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Who says they're unwanted grins |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Yeah -- before the "Because I said so"s... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Kaoru![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
*hits you with something glittery and pink* |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Mark that's another post grins. But the whys are just questons in general..before i starting THinking so much and forgot to FEEL how we wear down instincts and emotions wit thought lol megs |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph: first off the title is amazing . . . irony in itself there and I do know this feeling quite well kind of reminds me when you only had to come in when the streetlights came on . . . you know? that innocence . . . Oh, to harness that would truly be a miracle, but here you have harnessed the feeling of it quite well *smile* xxoo |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
this reminds me of something else you've written. i'm not saying youre repeating yourself, ![]() cant put me finger on it though. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read ![]() |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Aenimal I think I was born with "whys" and I still find them pretty useful, but I think you're talking about a different kind. I know those too. Wish I could write so short and meaningful, like you. ![]() |
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