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things I needed to say (To Moonlight Romeo)
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things I needed to say (To Moonlight Romeo) |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
At least this way, you can't ignore me. **************************************************** I listen to our loves songs and breathe them into my heart hoping that your hand will accompany mine in dance once again with heads bent close kissing foreheads undone passion Please do not turn your head away when I speak out loud pretending you do not see love unclothed I am with you but you keep breaking my heart with your silence When the roads twist and we go straight we hit trees and get lashed with the branches that hang low. love beheaded rolls to two seperate sides and we are lost lingering remains of love and the stench of a forgotten passion stain the ground for years after we have been swept up. I am undone again caught up in the us that soft thing we used to be You used to say you felt me each night before dreaming kissed my lips in your mind and could feel my heart reaching for yours. that connection is it severed? Please, Darling I have been too long without your voice you hands your lips your eyes and the sound of us when we were when we just were The people we used to be they fell in love demanded difference danced to love songs and held on that first time like it would be the very last time and perhaps it was because the people we have become are tired faithless drowned in mistrust and dying dreams of making a masterpiece of life. Please, Darling I have been too long without your trust you acceptance of who I really am your faith and your unconditional passion. I dream of your hands your arms your lips eyes and the sound of us when we just were. "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet" [This message has been edited by Siofra (08-28-2003 12:19 AM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
No Romeo could turn this down.I so feel the longing, the passion, and the desire in this.You bring it alive with your imagery and words.You ignite a passion within that longs to be touched again. Crystal |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
**You tear at the heart with words that show the depths of your love for him...May he hear them with a soft heart and willing mind.... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I have to tell you, this is amazing and truly touched me. I felt so much passion, so much yet to be unleashed. Most excellent writing!  |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
You, my Moonlight, have always had all of those things, especially my trust. I have not, nor will I ever, turn away from you. My eyes are always on you, and my heart will always be yours. I love you.  Peace is the only battle worth waging. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Siofra A passionate plea, beautifully written. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
I read heart filled passions,, |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Pain and love have been mixed, unfortunately, too well. This actually put a lump in the throat of a heartless idiot.. and he wishes you all of the success this write can bring. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, now I feel better! I just read Moonlight Romeo's reply! I could feel your wistful longing right in the center of my chest--it actually ached for you--wait a second, that didn't come out right! Well, I'm sure you get my drift!  Wonderfully emotive writing!  EA |
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