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Open Poetry #28

Quenched Passion (20 or less)

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-08-27 09:58 PM

Whispering waters
                shimmering
across our bodies
                basting us
with coolness
                has diluted
the probability
                of our
becoming
passionately entwined

[This message has been edited by QjQ (08-27-2003 10:56 PM).]

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2003-08-27 11:01 PM

You have done well, Young Grasshopper!

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-08-27 11:02 PM

You are good at these.

Crystal

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

3 posted 2003-08-27 11:45 PM

enjoyed this...and got a smile out of it too

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-08-28 01:00 AM

Very good writing, Glenn.

Hugs

Ethel

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-08-28 03:31 AM

whew! good stuff!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-08-28 12:09 PM

yummy!

Susan

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

7 posted 2003-08-28 12:24 PM

hmmmm....good job :-)

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2003-08-28 01:07 PM

yummy yummy yummy I've got love in my tummy
from the top of my head to the tips of my toes....
cherished write....

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2003-08-29 12:06 PM

Savoring a delicious thought.
Great write Q. TD

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

10 posted 2003-08-29 08:37 PM

A most creative write!
Remember, embers still remain!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

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