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Open Poetry #28

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Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-08-27 04:31 PM

A simple truth, a complex mind
a weak resolve, the darkling finds
a simple trick, to take control
a subtle move replaced my soul

A final peace, the gift he gave
accepting it made me his slave
What did I care?, the pain was gone
But yet I knew, a line was drawn

He whispered "give me that last piece"
and all your pain will surely cease
but I resist because I know
with that last piece, to hell I go

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (08-27-2003 04:56 PM).]

Gina Culliney
Member

since 2003-03-08

Posts 170

1 posted 2003-08-27 05:14 PM

This is a Poe- spectacular piece! Well penned, as ususal Darkling!

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-08-27 05:33 PM

Good for you Jason,
you are becoming the master
at longer write, m'friend
I adored this
*smile*
xxoo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-08-28 04:40 AM

Yeah, you don't want to go to hell...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-08-29 04:59 AM

speechless here

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