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Summer into September
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Summer into September |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. 
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As the long hot summer ends into September coolness becomes evenings and relief has the summer months left you to remember or were you to occupied and thought only brief with all the many sunny activities that were shared like beaches mountain hikes and traveling has left my mind drizzled and body impaired however with the breezes less tepid unravelling I anticipate a welcome and needed rest soon the fall leaves will be blanketing the lawn with a radiance of colors dressed at their best with the sun dropping low i see a graceful spring fawn leaping and bounding across the meadow so lush then without pausing it was out of sight now distant sounds of thunder have me in a rush back home as the birds head to roost in flight  [This message has been edited by QjQ (08-27-2003 12:51 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
All as the seasons change.. Very lovely write, Q. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is wonderful, as I have a fascination with the changing of the seasons. Where did summer go? Seems it left quickly this year... P.S....how did you put your initials into the smilie?? I love that...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Glenn  I'm amazed! You've done the ABAB rhyme so well! you are truly growing in your writings! i'm proud of you.  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
A wonderful piece of writing! And thank goodness some cooler weather is on it's way. I think the whole country was sweltering this summer.  Hugs, Marti |
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