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angelblueyes
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0 posted 2003-08-04 11:40 AM



As I sit on this cold, raggedy bench
I feel as if my heart's been pinched
Of all my love's come and gone
I wish there was somewhere that I belonged
I've given every love my heart and soul
And for these emotions, my heart has taken the toll
Maybe I share too much emotion
Maybe I ask for too much devotion
I have so much to share and so much love
I hope one day, someone can handle what I dream of
For even though my heart has been through hell
I know of love and want it so well

angelblueyes

© Copyright 2003 Crystal - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-08-04 11:43 AM


angelblueyes
A healthy out look, enjoyed the read.

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2003-08-04 11:57 AM


Crystal, with a heart-beacon as yours, someone worthy is bound to see it follow the pulse home.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-08-04 11:58 AM


Maybe I share too much emotion
Maybe I ask for too much devotion


so I have been told...fits me like a "T"

what does that mean anyway?

M

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-08-04 12:07 PM


Seems no matter what we go through, all said and done, we still strive for that all powerful word Love!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

LeeJ
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5 posted 2003-08-04 12:23 PM


this love you've known and still know will continue to shower you with all kinds of knowledge and understanding, and perhaps when the time is right...when your ready, you will know this love intimately again...only more so...better...more responsibly...blessings and smiles
lucky
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6 posted 2003-08-04 12:33 PM



Well,

someone special is going
to be lucky when they do.
nice heart in this one.

dale


Thomas119gold
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7 posted 2003-08-04 12:43 PM


Great write
hold on tight
Love will come
that will not run
Special it will be
for only you to see
wonderful love takes time
that way it rhymes
You will see
and he will set you free
he will pick to stay
with you everyday
Love will eventually
come your way




Thomas

angelblueyes
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8 posted 2003-08-04 01:31 PM


Seymour:Thanks so much

Mark:Thnak you so much.Just feeling a little down today is all

nakdthoughts:Thanks, glad to know I'm not alone.I don't think there is too much emotoin and devotion in life, it makes us the spiciest of angels anyone has seen. hehehehehe

SharaRose: I have to agree with you.It's always there.

LeeJ:Thanks for reading and commenting

angelblueyes

angelblueyes
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9 posted 2003-08-04 01:33 PM


lucky:Thank you very much for reading and commenting

Thomas:Thanks you made me smile

angelblueyes

Janette
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10 posted 2003-08-05 10:42 AM


want it ... need it ... gotta have it.

Anddddddddd you deserve it, too.

I can relate to this one ... enjoyed.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Kahlil
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11 posted 2003-08-05 11:00 AM


a.b.e.: Spend this time acknowledging the things you love about yourself.  You are right where you belong, and you'll be ready when love comes along again.  ~K~
JamesMichael
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12 posted 2003-08-05 03:11 PM


Be careful with your heart...give it slowly and take it back if appreciation does not grace your days...James
Darklight
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13 posted 2003-08-05 03:19 PM


Dear Angelblueyes

Reading your poem
a thought came to
my mind....

What if you can bring
all this love to yourself
your own heart

Love is a mysterious thing
being ourselves what we seek

Love,

L.

vandana
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14 posted 2003-08-05 07:59 PM


welcome to passions enjoyed
angelblueyes
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15 posted 2003-08-07 12:30 PM


Janette:Thank you my friend.

Kahlil:Thanks so much.I am learning to love myself more for without happiness within myself others can't partake

James:Thanks.I hear you loud and clear.After all the years and comings and goings I'm very particular of who I let into my heart.

Darklight:Thanks.I know in time it will come.Not sure if I could handle it right now...lol

vandana:Thank you.Glad you enjoyed

angelblueyes


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16 posted 2003-09-19 05:00 PM




(smiles) Oh Crystal, today is officially "Diving For Pearls Day" for me, where I go back and read and comment to poems I missed over summer vacation, and I found this beautiful vintage of yours, yay! (kiss on cheek) Your golden heart is flooding with love and very soon you will be able to share even more than, though everyday you already share so much love to us all! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Crystal, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

angelblueyes
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17 posted 2003-09-19 05:28 PM


Noah:Thank you, you are a light and inspiration to us all.
Crystal

Pilgrimage
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18 posted 2003-09-19 05:47 PM


I know that feeling. And I like the way you verbalize it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

garysgirl
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19 posted 2003-09-19 06:20 PM


I have so much to share and so much love
I hope one day, someone can handle what I dream of
For even though my heart has been through hell
I know of love and want it so well


Crystal, it will come one day.....probably when you
least expect it to. That's how it happened with
me and Gary. Neither of us was looking for a relationship
with anyone...with my husband dying and a lot of bad stuff
going on in mine and his marriage, and with Gary  just
going through a painful divorce. We are so thankful
that our
friendship did turn into love, though.
Hugs  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-19-2003 06:22 PM).]

angelblueyes
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20 posted 2003-09-19 08:14 PM


Pilgrimage:Thanks.

Ethel:Thank you so much my friend.You are a very special friend to have.

Crystal

Magnus
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21 posted 2003-09-19 09:32 PM


Crystal.....I know the feel of your poem
very well....for I love deeply and always
would be the one who never quit loving,
even at my last breath.  You deserve to have
a man who can handle the love that you carry
within your heart.  For there is a raging
torrent of love lying there...

angelblueyes
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22 posted 2003-09-19 09:34 PM


Magnus:Thank you.You don't know how much you've touched my heart.
Crystal

Earth Angel
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23 posted 2003-09-19 09:51 PM



May the love that you put out into the world, be returned to you tenfold!

Love & Light,
Linda

angelblueyes
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24 posted 2003-09-19 09:56 PM


Linda:Thank you my sweet friend.
Crystal

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