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My Heart On A Bench
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My Heart On A Bench |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
As I sit on this cold, raggedy bench I feel as if my heart's been pinched Of all my love's come and gone I wish there was somewhere that I belonged I've given every love my heart and soul And for these emotions, my heart has taken the toll Maybe I share too much emotion Maybe I ask for too much devotion I have so much to share and so much love I hope one day, someone can handle what I dream of For even though my heart has been through hell I know of love and want it so well angelblueyes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
angelblueyes A healthy out look, enjoyed the read. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Crystal, with a heart-beacon as yours, someone worthy is bound to see it follow the pulse home. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Maybe I share too much emotion Maybe I ask for too much devotion so I have been told...fits me like a "T" what does that mean anyway?  M |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Seems no matter what we go through, all said and done, we still strive for that all powerful word Love!  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this love you've known and still know will continue to shower you with all kinds of knowledge and understanding, and perhaps when the time is right...when your ready, you will know this love intimately again...only more so...better...more responsibly...blessings and smiles |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Well, someone special is going to be lucky when they do. nice heart in this one. dale |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
Great write hold on tight Love will come that will not run Special it will be for only you to see wonderful love takes time that way it rhymes You will see and he will set you free he will pick to stay with you everyday Love will eventually come your way   Thomas |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Seymour:Thanks so much  Mark:Thnak you so much.Just feeling a little down today is all  nakdthoughts:Thanks, glad to know I'm not alone.I don't think there is too much emotoin and devotion in life, it makes us the spiciest of angels anyone has seen. hehehehehe SharaRose: I have to agree with you.It's always there. LeeJ:Thanks for reading and commenting angelblueyes |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
lucky:Thank you very much for reading and commenting Thomas:Thanks you made me smile angelblueyes |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
want it ... need it ... gotta have it. Anddddddddd you deserve it, too. I can relate to this one ... enjoyed. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
a.b.e.: Spend this time acknowledging the things you love about yourself. You are right where you belong, and you'll be ready when love comes along again. ~K~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Be careful with your heart...give it slowly and take it back if appreciation does not grace your days...James |
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Darklight Junior Member
since 2003-08-04
Posts 12Sweden |
Dear Angelblueyes Reading your poem a thought came to my mind.... What if you can bring all this love to yourself your own heart Love is a mysterious thing being ourselves what we seek Love, L. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
welcome to passions enjoyed |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Janette:Thank you my friend. Kahlil:Thanks so much.I am learning to love myself more for without happiness within myself others can't partake James:Thanks.I hear you loud and clear.After all the years and comings and goings I'm very particular of who I let into my heart. Darklight:Thanks.I know in time it will come.Not sure if I could handle it right now...lol vandana:Thank you.Glad you enjoyed angelblueyes |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Crystal, today is officially "Diving For Pearls Day" for me, where I go back and read and comment to poems I missed over summer vacation, and I found this beautiful vintage of yours, yay! (kiss on cheek) Your golden heart is flooding with love and very soon you will be able to share even more than, though everyday you already share so much love to us all! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Crystal, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Noah:Thank you, you are a light and inspiration to us all. Crystal |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I know that feeling. And I like the way you verbalize it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I have so much to share and so much love I hope one day, someone can handle what I dream of For even though my heart has been through hell I know of love and want it so well Crystal, it will come one day.....probably when you least expect it to. That's how it happened with me and Gary. Neither of us was looking for a relationship with anyone...with my husband dying and a lot of bad stuff going on in mine and his marriage, and with Gary just going through a painful divorce. We are so thankful that our friendship did turn into love, though. Hugs  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-19-2003 06:22 PM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Pilgrimage:Thanks. Ethel:Thank you so much my friend.You are a very special friend to have. Crystal |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Crystal.....I know the feel of your poem very well....for I love deeply and always would be the one who never quit loving, even at my last breath. You deserve to have a man who can handle the love that you carry within your heart. For there is a raging torrent of love lying there... |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Magnus:Thank you.You don't know how much you've touched my heart.  Crystal |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May the love that you put out into the world, be returned to you tenfold!  Love & Light, Linda |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Linda:Thank you my sweet friend. Crystal |
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