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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WHEN THE BREEZE OF WINDS” by inkedgoddess & Bill Charles ~~~~ Sparrows sipping sunflowers, does your heart fly without fear or barriers, light in flight without a shadow, right here, not for tomorrow, can you drink sweetly in this moment, knowing the rounding harvest will soon own it… When nectar is sipped of one that’s fair, and a heart beats and is made gently aware, moonbeams dance in their afterglow, for now it is now, not ones that re-flow, lips will taste wine of pleasures sweet kiss, and yet the fall will come, but not to dismiss… Serenaded sunflowers, do you hear the echo from beginners upon the earth worn from before, as time unfolding yields to winters door, will this love still blossom when summer birds song is of long ago, can this harvest reaped now stay as such, aglow… Songs melody is of the fragrant meadow, and sounds whisper forth as they flow, from you, from I, into the now of it all, time does not move, still quiet in its trance, but listen to the shades of a loving romance, for when the breeze of winds blow strong and cold, warm of tenderness you will own fivefold… ~~~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful duet you two! Hope we see more of your blended pens. ~Summertime Smiles, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
time does not move, still quiet in its trance, but listen to the shades of a loving romance, for when the breeze of winds blow strong and cold, warm of tenderness you will own fivefold… Goodness...what a duet! This is an absolutely beautiful verse. Makes me want to fall in love before winter sets in...so that I have warmth in a season of cold. Love this, you two! Patricia [This message has been edited by Patricia (08-03-2003 10:06 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very lovely Bill and Michele... quite beautiful images too. *s M |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
do you hear the echo from beginners upon the earth worn from before, as time unfolding yields to winters door, will this love still blossom when summer birds song is of long ago, can this harvest reaped now stay as such, aglow… And the Passionate Poets Reign! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Two voices joined beautifuly. Eric |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Songs melody is of the fragrant meadow, and sounds whisper forth as they flow, from you, from I, into the now of it all, time does not move, still quiet in its trance, but listen to the shades of a loving romance, for when the breeze of winds blow strong and cold, warm of tenderness you will own fivefold… What a beautiful love song, Michele and Bill....just beautiful.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely to read...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love your voices entwined in this song of love. Very beautifully done. Love, Margherita  |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Very fine colabation. Enjoyed! Enjoyed! Enjoyed! SG |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's pretty damn good when you can't tell who wrote what part nice blend  |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Two blended beautifully. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
lovely If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
glad you enjoyed, and yes, once again, i was graced by mr. romance himself to let me fly off his coattails |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very winter warming, the images were superb. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! I'm so happy to see the both of you collaborating, dearest friends, this is most beautiful and when you hold the promise of love true to your heart, it seems to ward off any shiver or blizzard! (big hugggsssssssss) God Bless You, dearest friends, this is a treasure, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
You write beautiful music together. Thank you for joining hands and pens. Hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
How could a duet by a troubadour and a goddess be anything less than melodic?...  Warm hugs and smiles to you both! EA |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
As you know I haven't been here long so I don't know the 2 of you, but are ya'll married, or bf, and gf? Seems so real...like the 2 of you are as one...wow...very nice!  is what came to mind when reading this. You don't have to answer that..I am just saying this left me with the feeling of 2 people who are in love. Very loving, and tender, and sweet to the other.SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ohh I love this! A perfect mixture of both . . . The two of you do write beautifully together xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
great write guys |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a welcome melding of two striking artists. This piece was different than each, and awesome together. Bravo you guys! TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks again, and again, it was a pleasure to do this ...... as for Shara's question....do you want to field this one , Bill or should we keep em guessing........lol [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-03-2003 07:08 AM).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Serenaded sunflowers, do you hear the echo from beginners upon the earth worn from before, as time unfolding yields to winters door, will this love still blossom when summer birds song is of long ago, can this harvest reaped now stay as such, aglow… Beautifully romantic.... you make a great team  Maree. fate is not just |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
just doing a little breathing.....aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
You guys make a poetic music together. Nice job! |
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