Open Poetry #28 |
Shadow boxer |
Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Holy war A knight I fight for the truth only to find myself shadow boxing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn...don't that pack a punch? |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
the fight of your life yep dern tootin |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Who says Bigger is better. This write is absolute and total proof that great things do come in small packages. Outstanding job. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Ankaria Junior Member
since 2003-07-26
Posts 35Sask. Canada |
Sweet Victory A Warrior I fight for myself only to find Love At the old forum I was at, we would write poems inspired by those of others, I'm not trying to take away from yours, but only give my version. Your creativity jumped out at me. Very powerful poem. Ankaria |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I liked the way you put it into words Jason~ It's good to know I'm not the only one dodging my own shadow. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and my shadow seems to be winning too. sigh. Enjoyed this Jason--it's a favored theme of mine as well. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
The "truth" that he has subscribed to, of course. Nice one, Jason. Mind if I . . . Battle scars The Knight's medals proclaiming his Lord's truth Only to find himself with no Lady Kraw' |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good Knight! EA |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
ditto to the dixiechick, gotta love her cool j......real cool |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh God Jason, this is the one . . . *shaking head here* you're brilliant! xxoo |
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