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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-08-04 03:47 AM


Holy war
A knight
I fight for the truth
only to find myself
shadow boxing

© Copyright 2003 Jason Lyle - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-08-04 05:03 AM


damn...don't that pack a punch?
Local Rebel
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Southern Abstentia
2 posted 2003-08-04 02:42 PM


the fight of your life

yep

dern tootin

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Saluting with misty eyes
3 posted 2003-08-04 03:50 PM


Who says Bigger is better. This write is absolute and total proof that great things do come in small packages.
Outstanding job.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

Ankaria
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since 2003-07-26
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Sask. Canada
4 posted 2003-08-04 04:25 PM


Sweet Victory
A Warrior
I fight for myself
only to find
Love

At the old forum I was at, we would write poems inspired by those of others, I'm not trying to take away from yours, but only give my version. Your creativity jumped out at me. Very powerful poem.

Ankaria
   "Is all we see or seem, but a dream within a dream?"
                   -Edgar Allen Poe

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2003-08-04 04:30 PM


I liked the way you put it into words Jason~
It's good to know I'm not the only one dodging my own shadow.  


serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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6 posted 2003-08-04 08:12 PM


and my shadow seems to be winning too.

sigh.

Enjoyed this Jason--it's a favored theme of mine as well.


Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

7 posted 2003-08-04 10:43 PM


The "truth" that he has subscribed to, of course.
Nice one, Jason.
Mind if I . . .

Battle scars
The Knight's medals
proclaiming his Lord's truth
Only to find himself
with no Lady


Kraw'

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2003-08-04 10:48 PM


Good Knight!


EA


inkedgoddess
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Ohio
9 posted 2003-08-04 10:51 PM


ditto to the dixiechick, gotta love her
cool j......real cool

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
10 posted 2003-08-05 01:10 AM


Oh God Jason, this is the one . . .
*shaking head here*
you're brilliant!
xxoo

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