Open Poetry #28 |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296![]() |
Voice Sing oh time within the radiance of the sea Here we stand….embodied Where I see every vision of life Subtle is the perspective and theme Diverging, meandering, conclusive However resourceful…continuity With melody clairvoyance reaching out Profound is the eye of the moment And I shall never repress the infatuation Exuberant tentacles seeping unto my soul Light of dawn has stretched our realms Far beyond the mind's eye Summer dreams live within our frontiers Of celebrated hills moving veils Like a silver breast holding me closer still Into some peaceful place of loving memory Memory which brings me here….to this horizon Where from the essence… I live and gleam extension Do not deny a desire for presence Streetlights voice the city Pray while others sleep… For the golden hue of honey Shifting amber dunes A tiny drop becomes the sea Peace, submission, morality Volume of vivid collaboration Celebrates the echoes of transient mind Thoughts, feeling emotions So reflectively intertwined Sound of silence, unlikely to forget As the muse whispers Decree, flourishing yet of the greatest consciousness The page will never end here Though there was a time I feared your silence By Lee J. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Allowing the intent to sediment... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
With melody clairvoyance reaching out Profound is the eye of the moment And I shall never repress the infatuation Exuberant tentacles seeping unto my soul Light of dawn has stretched our realms Far beyond the mind's eye Summer dreams live within our frontiers Of celebrated hills moving veils Like a silver breast holding me closer still Into some peaceful place of loving memory Memory which brings me here….to this horizon Where from the essence… I live and gleam extension ======================= my this is stunning poetry... wonderful use of imagery and vocabulary.. a lovely ethereal write. Well done poetess Lee ![]() "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your words...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
LeeJ - you've written many powerful words here, nicely done... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot |
Oh how I love that last line...it is just so profound, and speaks volumes all by itself! ~V~ I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
many thanks to everyone...the last line is when I feared God the most...when I "thought" or assumed he wasn't there. Life is magnificent...no matter how hard the times...there is always another day...another second in which to learn from. Without family, friends, relationships, where would we be today? Such a generous life this is...preplanned? Maybe? smiles and hugs |
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