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Should have taken an umberella |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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You never gave me weather warning ~Quite the opposite Displayed rainbow pots and sunshine Raining hard about how you'd die without and for me Oh soft curve of storm why didn't you tell me you'd pass me by Now stuck in blue trying to forget means regular intervals Of thunder when I realise I have forgotten you for sixty seconds ~sometimes less Countdown upon my fingers that once traced your spine as you laughed Caught in downpour all I hear now is rain . Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 Girlfriend you go on with your bad self  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Gem *nudges* I see little hints in here..never mind  L*ved this girl LIBRARYcoughs..when was the last time YOU saw the stars? has been too long for me  the first open 28 for my library  insanity is not a crime |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh soft curve of storm why didn't you tell me you'd pass me by *********************** Dontcha just hate that? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It rains a lot here too. sighs, winks, and hugs. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Countdown upon my fingers that once traced your spine as you laughed Little Gemma, friend.....there will be someone else whose spine your fingers will trace..... just wait and see. (I know that's hard to even think of now, but there will be.....)  Huigs & Love  Ethel Mae |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I love you guys. sniff. I dooooo.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I love this, Gem! |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
amazing write....just amazing! riley * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
no comment  M |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Gem you amaze me again. Now that there has been so much rain And lots of heartache to sustain May the sun shine ever so bright And take you on the glorious flight For you are angelic for all to see And deserve love and sweet serenity angelblueyes |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
wonderfully woven, perfect title powerfully descriptive loss Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
somehow and someway gem, the rain will stop and you will be even made better for this...wiser, stronger, and look back someday and smile and be thankful for every thing...gem...you will...many hugs sent your way |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I hope the sun starts shining soon... Good write, Gemma! “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
look over there! a rainbow  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Nice work gem, aye but clouds break.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I always carry one under the front seat of my car...James |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
If this doesn't paint pictures within your mind, you are not able to see... Gemma, this is absolutely awesome... just what we've grown to expect from you. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
gemjop - I like this write a lot. You say it well... BC |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
A little further up I see an angel watering the stars. I say, let it rain!!!Makes cloud jumping so much easier! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"You never gave me weather warning" You have the neatest way of putting things!   LL |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gem? this is one of your best as of late . . reminded me a lot of things myself and the tickling down the spine - yeah - it is those things that make you crazy. Those little things that keep you wondering . . .but I also love the way you reverse the entire thing. You go back and forth from light to dark and that is something to be proud of in your writing. Vert hard to do and yes, should have, would have, could have . . . evil evil words xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a way you express your feelings, and mine |
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