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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-08-26 12:09 PM



+*+*+
Puppies are playful.
They are gentle and cuddly.
Their breath is so sweet.

Children's precious pets~
Lovable little playmates,
Forever loyal.
+*+*+

© Copyright 2003 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-08-26 12:11 PM


Earth Angel
That about sums it up, enjoyed.

timothysangel1973
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2 posted 2003-08-26 12:12 PM


YES!  Puppies are wonderful little creatures...I used to have the sweetest little Rockweiller puppy, problem is...he grew up and now he's a 120 pound blob in the back yard!

His name is Outlaw, and he's quite scary to those that don't know him....
...I so wished he was a puppy once again...
He ate Less!

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3 posted 2003-08-26 12:33 PM


I love puppies, however,
I'll have to disagree on the sweet breath thing. lol

Great write.

Connel
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4 posted 2003-08-26 12:51 PM


I have been gone so long, what a better poem to read first.

I loved this.. But the breathe thing, errr.. I dunno.. lol.

I hope you all know who I am.. If you dont, well.. I hope you get to know me..

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

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5 posted 2003-08-26 01:47 PM


Linda, I read this out loud to little Meeka my shih tzu, and she wagged her tail happily. I love puppies and I love this write. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

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6 posted 2003-08-26 01:53 PM


Awww, Linda Lou, this is so sweet. I still call
my little Scooter a puppy. Maybe he is...
he'll be two on Dec. 8th. He'll always be my baby.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-08-26 04:46 PM


A sweetly spoken truth.
Eric

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8 posted 2003-08-26 10:49 PM




(smiles) Oh Linda, I love puppies sooooooooo much, sweet friend, I've always wanted a border collie so much because they are so loving to children and strangers and they are also good watchdogs! (kiss on cheek) This is precious, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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9 posted 2003-08-26 11:56 PM


Mr. T. ~

Good almost morning!--It is nearing midnight as I write this thank you reply!


EA

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10 posted 2003-08-26 11:59 PM


Timothysangel ~

I understand that Rottweilers eat people! lol Sorry, just joking! Ever since I saw the movie "The Omen", I get a bit nervous around them! I'm so impressionable! lol


EA

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11 posted 2003-08-27 12:00 PM


Kaoru ~

Our puppy's breath smelled like peaches! lol


EA

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12 posted 2003-08-27 12:01 PM


Connel ~

Hiya, stranger! Where have you been?--Was it something I said? lol

Glad you're back!--to stay, I hope!


EA

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13 posted 2003-08-27 12:03 PM


Chris ~

Well now, doesn't that beat all! A Shihtzu loved my poem! It looks like my poetry is going to the dogs! lol

to you & to your doggy!
Linda

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14 posted 2003-08-27 12:04 PM


Ethel Mae ~

--and your Scooter has a very caring mommy!

Loves 'n hugs to you both!
Linda Lou

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15 posted 2003-08-27 12:05 PM


Eric ~

I appreciate your very "sweet" reply!


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16 posted 2003-08-27 12:07 PM


Noah ~

Border Collies make wonderful pets. Perhaps someday you will have one of your own!

Loving hugs,
EA

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17 posted 2003-08-27 01:53 AM


Very uplifting; I enjoyed it completely. For the other end of the specturm check out my poem "Goodbye my Faithful Friend;" I cannot promise it's as uplifting as this poem, but it will touch you deeply.

We Feel,We Write,We learn; We Write More

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18 posted 2003-08-27 02:06 AM


There is nothing quite like the unconditional love a puppy showers on you!!  Music Maker and I breed German Shepherds, and even though there is a lot of work involved in having puppies, the rewards are boundless! This is a wonderful write, as any dog lover will say...much enjoyed it!!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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19 posted 2003-08-27 12:06 PM


RomanticPoet ~

Thank you, RP! I checked out your poem and it really touched me. A beautiful write. I'm sorry for your loss.


EA

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20 posted 2003-08-27 12:08 PM


Sunnyone ~

Sounds wonderful and especially when you and MM share a common passion!--one of many I have been gathering!


EA

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21 posted 2003-08-27 02:57 PM


Awwww....I love and adore puppies/dogs. This poem is so precious.

Now, there's a couple of minor problems with puppies! They piddle everywhere until they're trained; and while they're teething, they chew whatever they can get their mouths around!  But they're loyal and they're adorable.  

Licks and tailwags from Bernadette .....

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22 posted 2003-08-27 03:30 PM


cute penning about the puppy's

gee i wonder if i were a puppy would i be adopted?

     


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23 posted 2003-08-27 04:33 PM


A very cute, sweet write.

Jason

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24 posted 2003-08-27 04:56 PM


Marti ~

Yeppers! Puppies can be a little bit of a nuisance--piddling, chewing, whining and fussing--but they are worth it! They are simply precious!

Sending great big hugs to Bernadette--and keep one for yourself!

Loves 'n hugs 'n smilie faces,
Linda

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25 posted 2003-08-27 04:56 PM


Q ~

You would be adopted in a heartbeat!


EA

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26 posted 2003-08-27 05:03 PM


Jason ~

Thanx, Jason! Have a great day!


EA

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