Open Poetry #28 |
Sometimes there are no words |
kaleanna Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 89TX, USA |
Sometimes there are no words Sometimes there are no words to be said as its all been said before Sometimes there are no words to hear for the tears silently fall Would you listen, if there were words to be said or would it just be wasted air would you really hear what my feelings are or would they fall on deaf ears Sometimes there are no words to be said for fear of hurting a loved one Sometimes there are no words to hear for maybe the feelings told will be thought of as they are not real Would the words fall on deaf ears would the tears continue to fall with no one to gently wipe them away would i feel as though im being turned away with no one to embrace. or Would the words that are said be heard would the tears be gently wiped away Would your arms wrap around me and pull me close (written aug 26, 2003) Meesh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Meesh, Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Very nice my poetic friend! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, I do know this feeling...and sometimes, sometimes it is a blessed feeling, and sometimes, it is a very empty, hollow ache... Well done. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wrote one by the same title...years ago...if I may share... Sometimes there are no words when the air is thin and the eyes are dry when the heart can't sing the song along no melody in emptiness gone by Sometimes there are no words when the darkness holds pain so great that silence is unbearable you cannot run anymore from fate Sometimes there are no words no feelings or emotions to play when you think "there's got to be something this can't be all I am today" Sometimes there are no words when you purposely rip out the pages clearing the pallet of the mind so the heart can go through stages where the pain is accepted and the numb is let go and living becomes easier then you come to know that sometimes there are no words when the air is thin and the eyes are dry sit back, breathe, and conclude that you don't need a reason why. Sometimes there are no words. |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
very beautiful..........sometimes there really are no words and it hurts like hell.But i'm curious to know which pain is worse.....saying the words or hearing the words that so desperately need to be said.....or silence. [This message has been edited by Lisann (08-27-2003 12:53 PM).] |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
kaleanna, There are times when no words need be said, or so we seem to wish. Yes, so much is about communication. And isn't that why we are here? - - - - - - - - - - - passing shadows, "sit back, breathe, and conclude that you don't need a reason why" I enjoyed your reply post, too. [This message has been edited by wandering glider (08-27-2003 07:04 PM).] |
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