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Suede Junior Member
since 2003-08-25
Posts 38Drifting on the soul |
Confused by simplicity my future within your eyes Drowning if i may love found beneath cries Allowed to be alive souls fallin as one Rising together setting as the sun Due to kiss the April showers embodied in time I danced upon pain the pleasure is mine All i am asking not for the stars in the sky The need to drown in you Can I |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
what a lovely thing to want...to need, and yet to be so kind to ask for...love is all we need,isn't it? Lovely heartfelt words articulating a beautiful poem of love. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suede Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This is so sweet. What lovely words for that one you love!! What a delight to read!!   SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
Beautiful piece of writing...thats all i can say |
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Suede Junior Member
since 2003-08-25
Posts 38Drifting on the soul |
Thank you for all your kind words, appreciated As forever is always - Suede |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Suede~ 'All i am asking not for the stars in the sky The need to drown in you Can I' What lovely, lovely poetic thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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